Float On or The Tradegy

[sexfest]

[a first draft]

keys hesitate in a stubborn lock, going in has never been easy. As the door knob turns my eyes overflow with tears that anticipate this old, empty, stale apartment.
Though I am greeted by life of the four legged kind my mind perceives the sheer blackness of a lonesome home waiting at the top of these stairs.
My legs work through the

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[joshm21]

Troubling

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[sexfest]

What is so troubling about this?

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[joshm21]

Do you read your shit!!! It is not a healthy way of thinking.

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[sexfest]

specify the unhealthy part of the poem.