seouldout, round 03

[sevenstreet]

3 seouldout prompt-inspired drabbles: two submitted, one not-submitted and which consequently exploded OTL concrit appreciated!

almost like flying
2PM, Jaebum/Wooyoung, G; 200 words
challenge 01:  the air i saved for later

Comments

[essyllus]

dude, you were one of my favourites during the seouldout competitions. number one, you write for my bias; number two, you write junsu well

His chest feels light and he grins; he’s spent far too long muttering into a cell phone instead of this, this conducting of poetry

i love your inclusion of the little known cell phone detail and how you weave in his love for poetry

"You guys go ahead," Junsu says. His foot taps out the beat as he turns his sentence over and over in his head, thinks about how his voice went sharp near the end. Khun smiles, says "come join us when you can," and closes the door.

this interaction right here!!! junsu's kind of the black sheep in the 2pm family, but i love how he's still included in your story T T it makes the satisfies the su stan in me l m a o

and Nichkhun thinks he might mean the way they don’t sit next to each other during meals, the way their conversations seem to evaporate as soon as Taecyeon or Wooyoung wanders off

this is so true :( i can totally imagine this, and i love how you capture their relationship this way by playing off their differences and junsu's awkwardness

when they tell him he’s being too loud
when they watch as Junsu tries and tries but still can’t quite do that spin in the air
when they roll their eyes and shrug their shoulders if Junsu’s last out the door, again

this really hurt, but it's so, so true :( khunsu is a great, dynamic pairing and i really like how you work this out.

PLEASE WRITE MORE FOR THE 2PM FANDOM ;_; I will be looking out for you ♥ /creepy

[sevenstreet]

thank you so much ;_; that means a lot to me, especially because you were one of my favorites! I still find myself thinking about your khunyoung :)

I'm so glad you think I write junsu well ;_; for some reason I really enjoy writing him-- he's got a deep personality that I feel like I can relate with more than the other guys, who really know how to ham it up for the cameras. also he is so gjsjkad underappreciated :( I was also surprised by how dynamic khunsu can be! I didn't think there would be much to work with in the beginning, but I find myself writing them more and more often now OTL

thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful comment, I really appreciate it ;_; I will try to write more, and you should too!! I will be creepy right back at you ♥