seouldout, round 03

[sevenstreet]

3 seouldout prompt-inspired drabbles: two submitted, one not-submitted and which consequently exploded OTL concrit appreciated!

almost like flying
2PM, Jaebum/Wooyoung, G; 200 words
challenge 01:  the air i saved for later

Comments

[sevenstreet]

thank you so much! ♥

[mrsatterthwaite]

The last one left me breathless. They were all great, but I know the last one is going to linger in my mind for a while.

Thank you for the wonderful reads!

[sevenstreet]

thank YOU for reading! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[essyllus]

dude, you were one of my favourites during the seouldout competitions. number one, you write for my bias; number two, you write junsu well

His chest feels light and he grins; he’s spent far too long muttering into a cell phone instead of this, this conducting of poetry

i love your inclusion of the little known cell phone detail and how you weave in his love for poetry

"You guys go ahead," Junsu says. His foot taps out the beat as he turns his sentence over and over in his head, thinks about how his voice went sharp near the end. Khun smiles, says "come join us when you can," and closes the door.

this interaction right here!!! junsu's kind of the black sheep in the 2pm family, but i love how he's still included in your story T T it makes the satisfies the su stan in me l m a o

and Nichkhun thinks he might mean the way they don’t sit next to each other during meals, the way their conversations seem to evaporate as soon as Taecyeon or Wooyoung wanders offthis is so true :( i can totally imagine this, and i love how you capture their

[sevenstreet]

thank you so much ;_; that means a lot to me, especially because you were one of my favorites! I still find myself thinking about your khunyoung :)

I'm so glad you think I write junsu well ;_; for some reason I really enjoy writing him-- he's got a deep personality that I feel like I can relate with more than the other guys, who really know how to ham it up for the cameras. also he is so gjsjkad underappreciated :( I was also surprised by how dynamic khunsu can be! I didn't think there would be much to work with in the beginning, but I find myself writing them more and more often now OTL

thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful comment, I really appreciate it ;_; I will try to write more, and you should too!! I will be creepy right back at you ♥

[essyllus]

btw, are the last few lines of patchwork literal? did su donate a part of his organs to khun?

[sevenstreet]

yes :) junsu may or may not remember it though, he just knows part of him isn't there.

[madelyn93]

aside from when the eye molds for Junho got squished just before transplant
YESSSS :D

ah, not many people write junsu and i'm glad that you do, because you paint such a pretty picture of him ♥