So my first problem is that I wrote a story about a kid who's been sexually abused ( Read more... )

This is called a Script for a Comic. This is like, the first seven pages. It does not take long to read, but it is a script, not a story in prose. That said, everyone should read it, tell me what is dumb and what is obtuse about it. If I cry, its okay I'm way over here ( Read more... )