I am really loving this. Is Horace an angel? And what about Sigurd? How many episodes are you going to have?
I love how you characterised Deans reaction to Sam and Ruby. Very well done and very, what I feel in this respect at least, true to how Cannon!Dean would react.
Till next time.
P.S. I noticed a few typos, i.e. spelling more - moer, and the such, nothing big, but prahaps when your done with the whole story you might want to go back and edit the individual episodes that you have here.
Horace and Sigurd aren't angels, they're something else, having just finished part 4 I've only added one other angel, Dean recognises them by scent Horace is amazing fun to write, he's not on acid by the way, he just flew too much the answer's there if you look closely enough, with Sigurd it's quite obvious, but you might want to look up her name
this is my nano and my beloved laptop is in the shop and I'm using someone else's keyboard and someone else's program (liquid story binder,) which i don't know how to work so that there is so few typos is amazing becauise I haven't found the spellchecker yet. apparently it has like ten languages programmed in, but I haven't found english yet
Okay, so I looked up Sigurd and found out that She (She? did you give Sigurd a sex change because In Wikapedia it says He, if so you rock) is a legendary Norse Hero. Since Sigurd is so old, did you turn her into a Vampire?
I also looked up the title of your story and found out it is the Snow Patrol song, and after downloading it, I just gotta say - That song Rocks!
Anxiously awaiting your next update.
P.S. I lost my whole NaNo last night - *goes off to cry in a corner*
there are going to be something like 20 episodes, each with a note and a soundtrack and Dean has secrets, and Castiel has secrets and I really read too much snicker i'm glad you're liking it
Love this series -- but the typos do it a disservice since they seriously break up the flow of otherwise great writing. Maybe a beta reader? I'm willing to put my money where my mouth is and offer to beta for you. I really do enjoy this universe, and Cas/Dean rocks. Either way, I can't wait for the next episode!
welcome to the joy of nano, I handwrote this and am now typing it up, but nano is done on the fly but I can't figure out the new spellchecker in my new writing program (is incompetent) it's going to be quite long so you might not want to offer to beta although the working title was Gods and children.
AH! A NANO project . . . prepare to lose all of your hair ;) I can't tell you how happy I am that this will be a long series!! That said, I would still be willing to beta -- it's not like you need help with anything serious, just someone to fix little grammar/spelling glitches and bounce ideas off of. I am very well acquainted with American Gods/Sandman/Supernatural 'verses.Feel free to contact me via e-mail [it's in my profile]. *friends you*
half the joy of writing anything long has to be the little sneaky bits you put in just for yourself see only you and me got the hotel dusk thing and you probably did the OMG! open mouth - hotel dusk! and she mentions the orange paintings!
wait till you get some of the other ones, i'm cheap there'll be loads of them
nano is great for reading, not so good on my wrist, which is now annointed with sacred tiger balm from the ancient temple of Boots the chemist, to increase my productivity.
The next one's up http://seraphim-grace.livejournal.com/466846.html and the one after that is at the beta the one after that is going to be typed up later tonight so its all win win for you my hand is dead though
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I love how you characterised Deans reaction to Sam and Ruby. Very well done and very, what I feel in this respect at least, true to how Cannon!Dean would react.
Till next time.
P.S. I noticed a few typos, i.e. spelling more - moer, and the such, nothing big, but prahaps when your done with the whole story you might want to go back and edit the individual episodes that you have here.
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Horace is amazing fun to write, he's not on acid by the way, he just flew too much
the answer's there if you look closely enough, with Sigurd it's quite obvious, but you might want to look up her name
this is my nano and my beloved laptop is in the shop and I'm using someone else's keyboard and someone else's program (liquid story binder,) which i don't know how to work so that there is so few typos is amazing becauise I haven't found the spellchecker yet.
apparently it has like ten languages programmed in, but I haven't found english yet
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I also looked up the title of your story and found out it is the Snow Patrol song, and after downloading it, I just gotta say - That song Rocks!
Anxiously awaiting your next update.
P.S. I lost my whole NaNo last night - *goes off to cry in a corner*
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I've got the wrong norse person, at least it's a simple cut and paste replace to change it
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sif
how did you lose your nano, you screamed at it and swore youd never write again.....
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please continue!!!!!!!
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snicker
i'm glad you're liking it
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gah seriously all these great stuff! makes me want to write a fic too!! (DAMN YOU NANOWRIMO!!!!)
but yea this is great! i am lovin' it!(More than mcdonalds~)
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but I can't figure out the new spellchecker in my new writing program (is incompetent)
it's going to be quite long so you might not want to offer to beta
although the working title was Gods and children.
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first year I've handwritten it as well.....
I'll contact you, maybe together we can figure out the spellchecker on this new WP
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There are a few typos, and a few passages left me just a little bit confused, but otherwise the writing is awesome!
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I thought i'd caught all the typos
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see only you and me got the hotel dusk thing and you probably did the OMG! open mouth - hotel dusk!
and she mentions the orange paintings!
wait till you get some of the other ones, i'm cheap
there'll be loads of them
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Looking forward to next.
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The next one's up
http://seraphim-grace.livejournal.com/466846.html
and the one after that is at the beta
the one after that is going to be typed up later tonight so its all win win for you
my hand is dead though
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