Lost and Found (1/4)

[serafina19]

Author: serafina19
Title: Lost and Found
Summary: Chloe decides that she needs space after her divorce and the Davis debacle. But she forgot that there were familiar faces in Star City until one of them approaches her in a crowded bar.
Timeline: AU Season 8
Rating: PG-13

Comments

Marvellous beginning :)

[bublee3]

Wow!!! I like this beginning, please you must continue writing this marvellous story (sorry my english is very bad but I hope you understand me). Can't wait to read what happens now, I love this Chlollie fic, thank you for sharing

Re: Marvellous beginning :)

[serafina19]

Your English is fine! No worries, I'm still writing away. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[scout09]

So you're losing your Chlollie mojo, huh? Could've fooled me! ;)

This is such a strong chapter that it could easily stand on its own, but I'm delighted we're getting 3 more. You know I love personal conversations in a bar AND when Jimmy's not killed off but rather just goes away, so this was an automatic win in my book. :)

Sure, this technically wasn't grief, as it wasn't like Jimmy died, but it felt like she lost a lot more than her marriage. Great point. Break-ups/divorce can often feel like someone has died knowing you may never see that person again. Sure there's comfort in knowing they're out there living their life, but the impact on your own life is similar. It's something that pissed me off about Clark 'siding' with Jimmy on the show. Regardless of whose fault it was, his friend was hurting big time and Chloe had been there for him every. single. time. he had even a tiff with Lana or Lois.

Out of everyone, she didn’t think that Oliver would be the first person that she would say those words to. It makes sense that this

[serafina19]

Losing, but not lost. While I am running out of graveyard fics, I think I have enough to hold on for now. Honestly, I blame the A03 account mainly for the B99 community and the desire to move on from FF.net.

I thought about letting this chapter stand alone, as I loved what I had written at the beginning. Then I practically wrote what will be Chapter 3, clinching that it would be posted.

I love that you outline the grief part. I had written that before remembering what it was for, but I liked it too much to take it out. Because you're right, it's loss in a different way.

For the other line, that is so true for me, and Chloe too here. As she finds herself realizing that she needs to take Oliver up on his offer.

Aw, I'm glad you liked that... and the whole chapter. Hoping to post more soon.

[hellzz_on_earth]

You always hook me and with Chlollie, I'm done for. lol
Love that Chloe said heck with it and left. Ending up in Star City, where Ollie found her in a bar. is even better.
Oliver didn't hesitate to go to Chloe even when he wasn't quite sure it was her sitting at the bar. lol I love that in just thi little instnace he's done some good for her. I can't wait for Chloe to finally confide in him and learn what exactly happened with Davis and Jimmy.
Thanks for sharing your greatness.
Happy writing.

[serafina19]

Aw thank you! That's so sweet.

It seemed like a plausible decision she would make in that situation. Having Oliver there gives her something that she doesn't realize that she needs yet, but she will.

[noellesullivan]

New fic yay!!!!
I like it, can't wait for more

Never give up on Chlollie.

[serafina19]

Yep. Thanks!

I'm trying not to, just running out of ideas. But I also said that last year, so I'll keep going for now.

[kachica]

enjoyed the beginning of this, can't wait for the next ep.

[serafina19]

Awesome! Hoping to post more soon.