round 04, challenge seven: results
round 04, challenge seven: elimination
#03 (-04) cartography by sansmerci
round 04, challenge seven: people's choice
#02 (+03) this wind won’t take us anywhere. by dystopialights
round 04, challenge seven: tallies
Round Four, Challenge Seven
01. Survial of the Fittest by subtleslide
02. this wind won’t take us anywhere. by dystopialights
03. cartography by sansmerci
04. we flock together by screenbias
05. we're significant. by cokecane
round 04, challenge seven: elimination comments
#03 - The only thing that stood out was a borrowed line. It's a good drabble, but it's not original.
#03 - It did not stand out as much as the others, and did not have as great an impact as some of the others
#03 - In comparison to the others, this drabble didn't stand out. A higher word count might have given it more substance - at the end, I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be taking away from the story, and so it didn't have much of an impact.
#03 - It was a good drabble, but it didn't stand out to me.
#04 - while i did enjoy this story, it took me several reads to understand it fully; the execution could have been much better.
#04 - I didn't really understand what was going on other than Jaejoong missed somebody. Their relationship also didn't come together for me.
round 04, challenge seven: favorite comments
#01 - This is all: lolololololol. Had me at "your arrangement of glycoproteins is stunning."
#02
#02
#02 - I've never been a fan of this pairing, but I liked how everything worked in this. Beautiful integration of the prompt and gorgeous prose.
#05 - The setting was really well described in the course of the drabble.
#05 - Enjoyable to read, a good balance of voice and prose - but it was the last line that sealed the deal for me on this one :)
cruel_disorder has dropped out from the challenge.