Undeniable Deceit - Tora/Saga, Saga/Nao - 2/10

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Undeniable Deceit
Chapter(s): 2/10
Author: sentimentalenvy
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Saga/Nao
Rating: M15
Genre: AU/Romance/Comedy
Synopsis: I really thought I would spend the rest of my life with one person and one person only. He was my first love, kiss, boyfriend, best friend and partner. The thought of betraying anyone never occurred to me until

Comments

[rainbow_legends]

*gasps* It's hereeeee!
*starts reading it*

Bad Nao is bad. ;w; I can't believe that he'd totally waste SAGA, of all people. :3

Rofl, Tora as Mr. Emo? It suits him. And it even seems that he has his own little world somewhere out of people's reach. *flails* ^^;

This is getting better! *_____* I wonder what Tora's reaction when Saga threw his arms around Tora's neck to gave him a big hugg-u. *feels all squishy* xDDD

I can't wait for the next chapter! ~~♥

[sentimentalenvy]

You know I was really happy to see your comment 0_0! lol XD!
I know I know @___@! But eventually Saga's gonna end up being too occupied for him so it all evens out o_o; *god I feel so cruel ;x* It's all for the sake of entertainment x_x

Ahaha I wanna add more to his past >_<;~! So he doesn't have to be some psychotic emo fool for no reason lol @O@/~

I'm glad to hear it thanks so much T__T/! ROFL @ hug o: Inner Tora wants to squeal and run in circles XD;

[rainbow_legends]

Really? You were?! *bats eyelashes* Yayyyyy! >8'DDD *flails around*

No, you're not cruel. I'm actually excited. *evil grins* I'm sure something sweet as sugar will happen to Saga and Tora. And I'm sure Saga's gonna like it and make up his mind and love Tora more because of that something sweeeeet. *wiggly eyebrows*

Come on, honey! Add more spice! I'm sure you'll be able to put it somewhere in the next chapter/story. ♥ Ehh, maybe...something from his lovelife past made him that emo and Saga then changed it all. *feels "aww" for the both of them* That'd be really something. >XDD *has bad imagination* Tora the psychotic emo rocks my socks, baybehhh! >8D \m/

You're welcome and you gotta update faster than the light, please? >XD because I'm really excited to see what happens next. o(^0^)o

And when Tora got home, he breathe in and out until his thoughts about Saga starts to run in his crazy dirty mind, and then thought about what'll smoking scene will happen next. Oh dear gad. Crazy me is crazy. xD Inner Tora should really run in

[sentimentalenvy]

I'm so glad to hear that x) ~

[athenstorm]

Nice, very nice. Please keep going ^_^

[sentimentalenvy]

I will XP !

[rechino_reno]

bad Nao! <<
how Tora feels when Saga hug him *grin*
want moarr!

[sentimentalenvy]

o_o! rofl XD

I knoww I will I will \@~@/~!

[silyria]

Why always miss this story? xD

So far I am really interested what will happen next!

Hope you update soon!