What a great twist! Both on the clam theme, and on the surprise turnabout at the end.
Caught a few grammar bits along the way:
often trying to create tabs under the couple's names are at the higher end bars in the city
Cici has had quit her job and was going to the gym every day.
It was a dream,; they took scuba lessons, bought their own equipment,
He showed them the shark cove, where there were threshers and a few hammerheads.
"Don't like lie to me!
"Jesus Christ, George!
filled with white and pink pieces.
she chuckled before pulling at his shirt,; Richard would be an enjoyable distraction
I loved how it opened not with the usual "winning the lottery, yay!" but with a more realistic look at the kind of false leeching friends and relatives that kind of sudden money would draw out. When it turned to George's plan to kill Cici I was all prepared to dislike him as the murderous husband with unfounded suspicions and a violent temper... but then the switch with Cici came along and now I'm pretty sure I don't like any of them! LOL! I like the story, it's a good twist and a fun bit of light horror with giant clams and sharks. ^_^ All of the characters are just sort of... well... morally slimy. ~_^ It's a nice showing of the baser side of us that money can bring out.
Caught a few grammar bits along the way:
often trying to create tabs under the couple's names are at the higher end bars in the city
Cici has had quit her job and was going to the gym every day.
It was a dream,; they took scuba lessons, bought their own equipment,
He showed them the shark cove, where there were threshers and a few hammerheads.
"Don't like lie to me!
"Jesus Christ, George!
filled with white and pink pieces.
she chuckled before pulling at his shirt,; Richard would be an enjoyable distraction
I loved how it opened not with the usual "winning the lottery, yay!" but with a more realistic look at the kind of false leeching friends and relatives that kind of sudden money would draw out. When it turned to George's plan to kill Cici I was all prepared to dislike him as the murderous husband with unfounded suspicions and a violent temper... but then the switch with Cici came along and now I'm pretty sure I don't like any of them! LOL! I like the story, it's a good twist and a fun bit of light horror with giant clams and sharks. ^_^ All of the characters are just sort of... well... morally slimy. ~_^ It's a nice showing of the baser side of us that money can bring out.
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