i live to let you shine

[seeds_of_chaos]

            “You realize how creepy you sound?  Let go of me or I will run.”  No guarantee I’ll get too far.

Spock’s eyes flickered over his face for a long few seconds before his grip released and his fingers slid away.  McCoy rubbed his arm, moving back to his seat but not sitting, inspecting his arm instead.  Gonna have bruises later.

Comments

[violettango]

Might be a good thing to keep this friend locked XD... But I wouldn't be surprised if your creative writing prof has gotten fanfic for assignments before!

I see that the angst has dropped in this portion of the fic, which is good! Perhaps that first part was just more angsty than the second.

I love how you have McCoy trump Spock in his best game: logic. Such a great moment!

[seeds_of_chaos]

It's not that I'm worried about other people seeing it, it's just that my Creative Writing Prof is now my advisor soooooo potentially awkward if he sees slash. XD;;;

I KNOW I'M WEIRD, BUT I DON'T NEED TO GO BROADCASTING EXACTLY HOW WEIRD TO MY COLLEGE ADVISOR 8D;;

Well, for some reason it was just too big for LJ to handle (wtf, I broke the internet again). And the episode itself is pretty damn angsty...oh man, so intense. But yeah, the first part was definitely more angsty; most of the tension broke when Spock asked what McCoy wanted.

[seeds_of_chaos]

YEAH, ALSO THE POURING-OUT-HEART THING. I REFERENCE FIC WITHIN FIC. 8D;

I don't know why, it just seemed really appropriate. That song's grown on me a lot; it's really pretty.

It's okay, I like McCoy's hands and arms details too.
That fucking accent XD; I read over his dialogue three times and kept making adjustments.
...MIZ LEILA.

[xanithofdragons]

The ending was super adorable!

I really love how you capture Spock's illogical side.

[seeds_of_chaos]

Thanks~! X3

I love McCoy's line of "Shame to waste a good face." I d'awwwwwed. X3