At least I got a draft out of it.

[seajules]

My steampunk faerykrusher sword & sorcery story is "perfectly good," but not what they're looking for at S&S 24. Which means I can perhaps hang some tapestries and throw some rugs on the floor to mitigate the draftiness. Anybody up for beta duty? About one thousand words, with some blood.

Comments

[asakiyume]

I would simply *enjoy* reading it, but I'm not sure I feel qualified to critique. I could tell you what parts I especially loved, though, so you could know what worked for an Asakiyume-like reader.

[seajules]

Letting me know the bits that are good is very helpful, too. Shall I send a copy your way, or would you rather comment to the draft I put up?

[asakiyume]

Either way!

[seajules]

I shall send it to you. I figure that might make it easier to comment at your leisure.

[asakiyume]

Yay--I'll look forward to it.