First, I want to say to all those in the path of Hurricane Katrina that my thoughts are with you. I hope everyone stays safe and well.
Here's my story for the
Writers' Workout Challenge, using the first person subjective, a completely new fan fiction writing experience for me. I loved this challenge. It really did push me to consider new things.
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"If I'd known where each step was leading her, I would have made her sit back down, stay there forever . . . "
What happened to Chloe?!
Ironically, I was far more upset about the poor boys than I was Lana. But I consoled myself with the idea that they are somewhere safe together having lots of sex, beacuse of the not aging and the happily ever after, right?! *g*
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I was trying to give the impression that Chloe gets killed in the line of work, but I wanted to leave it a little mysterious. *smiles*
And yes! You know, time works differently out in space, so Lex and Clark still have a lot of lovin' and togetherness ahead of them. :)
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erm, also -- starlings don't build twig nests, they nest in holes, and usually communally. Blue Jay, Robin, Mourning Dove (particularly careless nesters, often within view of a window, and nests fall apart easily) are all possibilities. None of them will feed their young seeds, though: it's a high-protein diet only for them all until fledging at least. And the sound of the babies isn't really a squawk, it's always pretty high-pitched.
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Great story, though I wonder what happened to Chloe. I also like the starling nest reference you make in the beginning and the end.
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As for Chloe, I wanted to give the impression that she was killed while following a story. And I'm glad you liked the starling reference. That's actually my own favorite part of the story.
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