On the Fringe // Chapter Two

[xaefryl]

Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: EventualLuke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, slash (m/m and f/f). Spoilers for The Last Olympian. Also, there's a handful of OCs, but most of them are camp counselors with minor roles.
Author's Note: I'm planning for this to be a relatively short

Comments

[charlie_jae]

Dude that was intense. I was so giggling like a teenybopper over Percy's last dream. He is so in denial, poor thing. I can't believe it hasn't occurred to him that the more he avoids Luke the more he becomes suspicious.

[chizwiffle]

That was spectacular. Absolutely spectacular! I love long chapters! You should always make them this long! It's so wonderful and refreshing to have so much to read! It really brings something to the story and makes it almost seem like the books themselves

Squee

[alessiasrequiem]

It is so hard to find -good- fanfiction with this pairing... So thank you so much for this amazing piece of awesome... I was really sad when I got to the end of this chapter :( I can't wait 'till your next update!

I adore your use of Percy's freaky dreams... It's wonderful :D

Also, I really like the entire universe you've created for our boys... Now they have a place where they can 'play nice' together without having to worry about the whole Luke-being-a-traitor thing, or the whole Percy-being-with-Annabeth thing :) You've handled both obstacles to their relationship in a delightfully wonderful and believable way. Kudos to you! :D

*fangirl flail*

Oh yeah, one more thing...
If this takes more than six chapters, I won't mind :3

[zetta_4799]

Dude you absolutely need to hurry up with the net chapter... Really.. [Though I don't want to rush you because it might affect the quality of the work]... But you just made my night dude.. >:D This is going to my PSP!! [To read 'cause I can't use my laptop] [._.] mom's orders really bites sometimes... But enough about that.. Now it's time for the real review.. [This would serve as my review for the 3 chapters

[lexstorm]

Poor Grover if he can feel that too...but well may be that's not so bad.
This chapter had me on the line of excitement and doubt, i jusl love it!
And guess what? I rode two chapters today, i know it doesn't seem to be much but believe, for me is a new mark becuase usually i go to sleep at 12 a.m. So i've made it =D
Good Luck.
Alex
P.d. I'm such a lier, i sleep until 4 in the morning, and normally i read a complete fic before, so i'll probablh going to coment the next chap too!

[xaefryl]

*snerk* Yeah, Grover's getting a mindful.
I'm glad you're enjoying this fic so much! :D I'm always happy when readers like when I write, especially when they're staying up late to read it! XD Though it's really making me feel guilty that I've yet to finish writing the sixth chapter. Must get that done so you don't have to wait too long for it!