On the Fringe // Chapter Two

[xaefryl]

Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: EventualLuke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, slash (m/m and f/f). Spoilers for The Last Olympian. Also, there's a handful of OCs, but most of them are camp counselors with minor roles.
Author's Note: I'm planning for this to be a relatively short

Comments

[chizwiffle]

That was spectacular. Absolutely spectacular! I love long chapters! You should always make them this long! It's so wonderful and refreshing to have so much to read! It really brings something to the story and makes it almost seem like the books themselves!!

I loved the dream that Percy had. I also loved the daughter of Hecate that you added in. There's so much mystery in this chapter and it keeps building! I love it!

Luke had some pretty poetic words to say there in the heat of his anger. But I can understand his frustration really. It's sad, but he really does need help, not pity! I can't wait to see what comes of it! I love how he is so certain that Percy is the key to unlocking what's going on, which leads me to believe that there's probably more going on than what might originally be thought! It's not just about how people are treating him, is it? Oh so interesting and fascinating!

I can't wait to see where you go with this! I can't wait to see what happens between Luke and Percy and how it happens! Everything is just so wonderful! Please keep writing long chapters like this, and please post soon! I can't wait too long now!!!

:D More please!