On the Fringe // Chapter Four
I owe apologies to everyone for the lateness of this chapter. D: *hands out apology-cookies* I'll do something to make up for it later. Like maybe actually post the smut drabbles this fic spawned.
Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: EventualLuke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, ( Read more... )
Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: EventualLuke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU, ( Read more... )
Well, for one, that dream was HOT. And a teaser. You are a tease, woman. And that is a very mean thing to be when you're a writer. Very mean! -shakes fist- But woooo! Percy was hot and Luke was hot and WHY DID IT HAVE TO END! -huffs-
Second, I really loved Tayen in this chapter. I love that she's dating Emma and Ella, and that tickled me awfully when I read it. But I love what she said about Luke and LUKE! @(#&@(&#@(#&(@#&
WHERE DO I EVEN START WITH HIM!?! The sparring scene, the talk after it, oh my god. I just can't process all this awesomeness! There's so much going on and so many things that could be going on! I have so many ideas in my head that it's bordering on ridiculous and obsessive. But I really love what Tayen told Percy. EVEN IF I DON'T KNOW WHAT IT ALL MEANS. Percy is the key, and when Luke figures out how to use that key...woooooh boy the things that can happen!
And of course, Nico is awesome. He really is. I love that you finished the chapter with Nico and Annabeth. There's obviously going to be a lot going on in the next chapter and I can't wait for it!
...I said I can't wait for it!
I CAN'T wait for it!
...So stop taking so long! -whines and claws pitifully at your door- Please! I need more! More!
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EXCUSES ASIDE. AND ALSO MY PITIFUL SMUT SKILLS ASIDE, the dream ended because I kind of wanted to keep things from edging over to the world of 'RATED R'. Not quite ready for that yet. Also, you know I do it to torture you because I love you.
Tayen surprised me; she was originally meant to give a sort of background on the new characters and cabins, but then she's all "I KNOW ABOUT LUKE'S MAN-CRUSH ON PERCY" and I'm all "D: WHY DO MY CHARACTERS TAKE ON LIVES OF THEIR OWN?" But she's fun and has been quite useful and awesome in her own right for a character I made up on the spot in chapter one. Haha. Also, Tayen/Twins is my fan OC OT3. Urge to draw for fun rising.
YOU AND YOUR IDEAS. I'm totally winging it on the next chapter, trying to explain things, but I can promise, there will be explanation and hopefully, the fic's explanation will make more sense than I did when you talked to me over AIM about this key business.
NICO NEEDS TO THROW HIMSELF INTO THE SCENE MORE OFTEN BECAUSE HE'S AWESOME AND APPARENTLY KNOWS MORE ABOUT WHAT'S GOING ON THAN I DO. WHICH IS SAD. Also, sorry about the capslock, I have caffeine in my system again and that does weird things to me. We will see more Nico soon, too.
I'm halfway done with the next chapter, so HOPEFULLY, it will be done by Sunday, when I'm hoping it will be done. If not, you'll have all rights to use Plan Delta on me.
AND NOW, SUPERSPAZ, AWAY~ *insert a bad rendition of the Superman theme song here*
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SUPERSPAZ! BAHAHAHA I love it! Awww! My Spazz sister! My twin!
You better have the next chapter up by Sunday. If you do not, you are right, I WILL plan Delta you so fast you won't even know what hit you! So be prepared, missy!
I absolutely love Nico. And he is going to have many major parts in our RP, I promise you, because I'm just itching to write him. So badly. I actually have another one-shot idea involving Nico. Because we just need more of him. He's so awesome. (And he's like me, we know more about what's going on in your story than you do. :P JK!) I like to think I do, since I make up all this awesome stuff that can happen in future chapters. :P So we better see more of him!
Winging it is good. That's half the time how I end up writing. I think I have things all planned out and then BOOM, the characters decide to run away from me and be real people. I feel your pain. I actually fight with Joe (From Jonas Brothers, my other fandom) and I fight with Percy and Luke now too. They are feisty and really really get on my nerves sometimes. -_- So I FEEL YOUR PAIN.
I ALSO LOVE CAPSLOCK. I am not going to lie, but I was pretty much spitting out non-existent water when I read your comment, because I was laughing so hard. "I KNOW ABOUT LUKE'S MAN-CRUSH ON PERCY." Oh my god. That was so classic, and just rewriting it made me crack up all over again! Tayen/Twins=hot. And you KNOW in RP we'll have a bit of a parallel to that... Luke/Stoll Bros. :P OH AREN'T WE GOOD. Bahahaha
And your smut skills aren't pitiful! They just need some reanimating! It's been too long since you were working with robots, or half-robots, or aliens, or erm...anything not remotely human. :P WE WILL FIX THIS. I AM HERE TO HELP YOU THROUGH THESE TOUGH AND TRYING TIMES!
And an R-rating is beautiful. I've always enjoyed the R-rating. :P Just thought I'd let you know that. EVEN THOUGH WE KNOW THE ONLY REASON YOU'RE DOING IT IS TO TORTURE ME! -FLAILS-
I MISS YOU AND I MISS THIS STORY AND I NEED MORE OF IT AND LUKE IS REALLY SEXY IN HIS 'I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S GOING ON BUT I'M STILL LUKE SO YOU HAVE TO LOVE ME' TYPE OF WAY! AND PERCY IS HOT BECAUSE HE'S ALL SEXY IN HIS 'I'M PERCY JACKSON LOVE ME BECAUSE I'M JUST SHEER AWESOME AND I CAN SMITE YOU WITH A PUDDLE IF YOU DON'T' TYPE OF WAY.
...I think I need to go to bed. You cheered me up, in case you haven't noticed. You are my love. -hugs and squishes-
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