On the Fringe // Chapter Four

[xaefryl]

I owe apologies to everyone for the lateness of this chapter. D: *hands out apology-cookies* I'll do something to make up for it later. Like maybe actually post the smut drabbles this fic spawned.

Title: On the Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: EventualLuke/Percy, past!Percy/Annabeth. Also some OC pairings, but those are very minor.
Warnings: AU,

Comments

[charlie_jae]

Wow, talk about being conflicted. I so love where this is going, and man those dreams are hot. I am slightly jealous, lol. I feel sorry for Percy only cause he has no one to talk to about this whole thing. I'm glad he realizes what is going on regarding his feelings to Luke.

Does that mean Luke is starting to see the same way? Hmm.... Oh how I love this story!

As for the no internet thing, wow, that makes me sad. It does. Is there no way to like go to a library with net access where you're at?

[chizwiffle]

There's SO MUCH in this chapter that I seriously don't know where to start. It's taken me so long to actually comment because I've had to reread quite a few times just to get my thoughts in order! And of course I had to have a talk with you, hahaha. So much going on! Where do I even start?

Well, for one, that dream was HOT. And a teaser. You are a tease, woman. And that is a very mean thing to be when you're a writer. Very mean! -shakes fist- But woooo! Percy was hot and Luke was hot and WHY DID IT HAVE TO END! -huffs-

Second, I really loved Tayen in this chapter. I love that she's dating Emma and Ella, and that tickled me awfully when I read it. But I love what she said about Luke and LUKE! @(#&@(&#@(#&(@#&

WHERE DO I EVEN START WITH HIM!?! The sparring scene, the talk after it, oh my god. I just can't process all this awesomeness! There's so much going on and so many things that could be going on! I have so many ideas in my head that it's bordering on ridiculous and obsessive. But I really love what Tayen told

[xaefryl]

First off, I swear I'm working on the next chapter. Percy is making it hard because he's all fidgety and 'ASFKJDSF' about breaking the news to Annabeth and making me facepalm and want to play video games while he settles down. MUST INTRODUCE PERCY TO A THING CALLED 'LIQUID COURAGE'.

EXCUSES ASIDE. AND ALSO MY PITIFUL SMUT SKILLS ASIDE, the dream ended because I kind of wanted to keep things from edging over to the world of 'RATED R'. Not quite ready for that yet. Also, you know I do it to torture you because I love you.Tayen surprised me; she was originally meant to give a sort of background on the new characters and cabins, but then she's all "I KNOW ABOUT LUKE'S MAN-CRUSH ON PERCY" and I'm all "D: WHY DO MY CHARACTERS TAKE ON LIVES OF THEIR OWN?" But she's fun and has been quite useful and awesome in her own right for a character I made up on the spot in chapter one. Haha. Also, Tayen/Twins is my fan OC OT3. Urge to draw for fun rising

[chizwiffle]

(First thing you get to learn about me, I always answer comments backwards. :P

[lexstorm]

You remember when i told you not to worry for update this fic

[jan_rea]

Yeah~!! Finally, some old school hot, smutty goodness between Luke and Percy. It's nice to see that the boys are finally catching up on the actions (although it's only in their dreams, but oh well, a girl will take any slashy goodness that is offered to her...XD)!

Good to see that Percy finally realized his attraction and love for Luke, and I think Luke might have had a liking to Percy too~Now with Annabeth back in the equation, it's interesting to read what will happen next~

And you managed to weave in some mystery and suspense into the story too~

Hope that there will be more Luke x Percy in the next chapter~!

*pants heavily from rushing off to read each chapter quickly*

[xaefryl]

*snicker* Too true; a girl will take any slashy goodness offered. :D But that's why we enjoy it so much!

Oho. I won't spoil anything. You'll have to read the sixth chapter to find out what happens next. Okay, actually, small little spoiler: Yes, there's more L/P in the next chapter. XD Go read and enjoy!