The Limit - Chapter Sixteen

[unwindingdreams]

Just a note....the rating squeaks up a tiny bit on this one. I still think it is appropriate for most readers, though, just slightly more explicit than previous chapters.

Thanks for reading, and Happy Thanksgiving!

Comments

[sugangel7]

Thanks for the Thanksgiving present. You rock.

Ohhh...what a wonderful chapter. I don't think I have anything insightful to say because oh, I just can't get over how things are progressing with those two.

Wow. So things definitely progressed emotionally with them in the last chapter at the end and in this one, we see things progress physically as well.

Well, one thing I found interesting was how Nathan wants Haley to need him as much as he needs her. I love that Haley is not necessarily the only one insecure when it comes to this relationship. Nathan, too, will be all unsure about where things stand with them...like here:

“Are we okay?” he asks far more timidly than he would like.I love seeing that. It just goes to show how much he does care for her and how different she is from other girls since he isn't as cocky and self-assured around her