Fate Averted - Chapter Eight
Well, it's been a little while, but hopefully you all are still with me on this story. :)
This part was a little hard to write in some ways. The first part more than the rest, because while panic and desperation are really ingrained in this version of Nathan, it's still hard to write this bad, you know ( Read more... )
This part was a little hard to write in some ways. The first part more than the rest, because while panic and desperation are really ingrained in this version of Nathan, it's still hard to write this bad, you know ( Read more... )
There really are no words though to describe just how beautiful it is. But it just tugs at my hearts and makes me believe even more strongly that a love like that is possible. That enduring kind where you haven't seen the person in years but they can still mean the world to you. The kind where seeing that other person hurt is the most hurtful thing to you. The kind where you love that person enough to want the best for them even when the best excludes you.
Oh, I want that kind of love so bad. In one sense, it could break me and maybe I'd end up with another tragic story like the one of Haley and Nathan's love here but in another lifetime...I could be with that person forever. And that's what I want for those two so badly. I want Nathan to have his other lifetime and do things differently.
And I so vividly felt his pain and regret and Haley's too. Also, I have to mention that I really liked how you had Nathan feel that Katie was looking at him. It just made it all hit so much deeper.
And hmm...what's this next bad part? I'm inclined to think that Haley and Luke possibly get together because I think that would definitely hurt Nathan deeply but it could definitely be something else as well that I'm just not thinking of...so I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Please don't keep us waiting for too long though. I'm hopelessly addicted to this story! ;)
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