Fate Averted - Chapter Eight

[unwindingdreams]

Well, it's been a little while, but hopefully you all are still with me on this story. :)

This part was a little hard to write in some ways. The first part more than the rest, because while panic and desperation are really ingrained in this version of Nathan, it's still hard to write this bad, you know

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[babyjamesismine]

awww Brynne *sighs* SO sad, but so well written, for fanfiction it doesnt bother me as much if there's other stuff going on, like babies with other men, and if people are giving you a hard time about any part of this story just dont listen to them because really this story is so well written and has depth and emotion and thats all that matters. I cant wait to see what it is that's "worse"

This story is so heartbreaking to me because Nathan, if he goes back, is always going to have these memories with him, he's going to carry around this pain, and it should motivate him but it still sucks. And I cant get over the fact that this is going all the way back pre-NH dating, like...is Nathan then not going to propose because he thinks it'll be smarter to marry later, or...I mean he doesnt have control on whether or not Chris shows up in Tree Hill right? So does that mean he's gonna have to change his behavior when that part of his life comes about....is he going to do everything the same up to that point or what?? Because Im assuming he's responsible for the whole BLP mess as well or it's all going to end the way it did....of course it's up to him if he thinks Peyton would be ok with that Alex guy....but how is he going to do this without it seeming like he's meddling?? Eek so many questions cant wait to get the answers!!

Great job Brynne! =)