Fic : Second Chance (PG) | Sarah Jane/Peter Dalton, Ten/Rose, OC (Nicole), Mickey | 14/?

[boro_girl]

Figured it was about time I updated the summary and characters!

Title : Second Chance
Author : Jen
Rating : PG at the moment, possibly higher in later parts.
Pairing/Characters Sarah Jane/Peter, Ten/Rose, OC (Nicole), Mickey
Summary : Sarah wished for one more chance with Peter; the Universe gave it to her. After changing the past she finds that

Comments

Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[weimlady]

You know how Peter came back for Wendy, many years later, only to find she was grown up and her daughter, Jane, was the little girl in the bed? That's what flashed very strongly in my mind as the Doctor met Sarah's daughter. And she, OF COURSE, took a shine to him.

The Doctor IS Peter Pan, of course. The boy who never grows up. The boy from Neverland who entices young women to travel there with him. He takes a more circuitous route than the real Peter, of course. You never quite reach Neverland with the Doctor. Too many fascinating detours to take. :) And we wouldn't have it any other way!

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[boro_girl]

Wow. I never really thought of it that way but this is so true. I'm never going to be able to look at the Doctor in the same way again!

Nicole is massively enchanted with the Doctor, and that'll come back in later parts - she's very much her mother's daughter.

Thank you so much for the feedback!

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[weimlady]

Oooh, Sarah is going to be SO jealous. I mean--look at how she is so insistent that Rose and the Doctor are just mates. She can't face any other possibility. He's HER Doctor! And quite right.

Of course, she has her Peter this time. So maybe she'd be okay with Nicole going off with the Doctor. Didn't do her any harm, after all. And think of the things she could then offer through her party-catering service. Alien hors d'oeuvres!

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[boro_girl]

So maybe she'd be okay with Nicole going off with the Doctor. Didn't do her any harm, after all.

Heh. Maybe - but maybe not. What parent would wave their child off into a life of excitement and danger on a scale infinitely bigger than anything you could imagine on Earth. Yes, Nicole would love it and the Doctor would be the most amazing teacher, open her eyes to what's out there. To face Daleks and everything else? Given how desperate Sarah's been to protect Nic from the moment she was born?

If Nic really wanted to go, Sarah would wave her off. But if it were up to her? Not sure she'd let her go...

But it's an interesting thought all the same!

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[spydurwebb]

OK, now you're BOTH making me think. Darn you!

Hmph.

Going away to re-evaluate something.

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[boro_girl]

Think about what?

*whistles*

Re: Love the Peter Pan feel of this part

[spydurwebb]

Not sure I'm gonna tell you...yet.

Gotta ponder more.