Bruised Update
Productive day today. A whopping 1,524 words. And two very significant scenes and one minor one added.
A favored line from each scene:
Scene One:
John’s world was whirling in vague circles, movements, noises and colors siphoned through a surreal twirling haze of disbelief and helplessness.
Scene Two:
Rodney paced back and forth, agitation bursting out in nervous energy.
Scene Three:
And for a long time he was only aware of the basics. Rutting. Fetid breath on his face. Pain. Hurt. And more pain.
A favored line from each scene:
Scene One:
John’s world was whirling in vague circles, movements, noises and colors siphoned through a surreal twirling haze of disbelief and helplessness.
Scene Two:
Rodney paced back and forth, agitation bursting out in nervous energy.
Scene Three:
And for a long time he was only aware of the basics. Rutting. Fetid breath on his face. Pain. Hurt. And more pain.