Comments | sanjuno: "I want to TOUCH it." "DON'T touch it!" "But-! *wibbles*"

sanjuno

"I want to TOUCH it." "DON'T touch it!" "But-! wibbles"

Jul 16, 2009 22:29

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: What's the worst that could happen? Well... Starscream could always end up stuck with these morons for the rest of his function...
Timeline: More of this fic is over here!

The first half of this part!

( What? Starscream is a stubborn little glitch. You didn't think he could be wooed and won in a single post, did you? Ha! )

transformers fanfic, transformers, series: nine rings of vos, random, pairing: starscream/thundercracker/skywa, smut, fanfiction, dragons

Comments 59

libbybird22 July 17 2009, 02:52:42 UTC

I just love this story. as for your sunburn, I hope it gets better. I just got over a second degree sunburn myself that covered my entire torso. I was in so much pain that I had to call in to work every day for a week. Got to love sick leave. Try a product called solarCain with aloe and lidicane. it comes in an arisol can so you can use it without anyone having to put it on you. I went through like ten cans while I went from lobster red to peeling.

sanjuno July 17 2009, 04:33:44 UTC

Thanks! Ouch, that doesn't sound like much fun for you. Um, you'll probably hate me for this, but my family has this funny little habit of... not peeling after we burn. Or even burning all that badly. I'm red now yes, but by the time I wake up tomorrow it'll have faded to tan. And it doesn't hurt at all. At most, it feels a bit warm. XD

libbybird22 July 17 2009, 16:45:16 UTC

You're right. I do hate you. Can't wait for the part.

sanjuno July 17 2009, 19:35:36 UTC

*chortles* Next part is coming soon. XP

nekohitori July 17 2009, 04:13:43 UTC

Hi there. Long time lurker, first time poster. I just wanted to say that I love this series (I've re-read it at least three times), and I always feel gleeful whenever I get a message saying you've updated with a new chapter. I especially enjoy the portrayal of how the Seekers few other Cybertronians. It kind of reminds me of my fellow Texans; we know we're superior in every way, but that doesn't mean that you're not bad. We're just better. XD

I'm sorry to hear about your great-aunt; my family and I went to a funeral earlier this week for a neighbor, so I feel for you.

sanjuno July 17 2009, 04:36:48 UTC

Yay a lurker! *pulls our electric tag* Now hold still, this won't hurt a bit... XP I'm glad you like the fic, it's always nice to hear from someone new... Heh. I'm, um, actually playing a bit off how I feel to be Canadian. XD I guess everyone feels that way about where they come from.

Thanks for the sentiment. ^_^

nekohitori July 17 2009, 05:09:32 UTC

Yes, but do all those other places have Chuck Norris? XD

I kid. Actually, from what I can tell from the Canadians I've met (a small number, yes, but more than a lot of other people), ya'll are pretty cool. ♥

And now that I've unmasked myself, do you mind if I friend you?

sanjuno July 17 2009, 05:21:24 UTC

... Will you hurt me if I admit that I have no idea who that is?

Canadian girls kick ass. And I've got the t-shirt to prove it. XP Truth of the matter is that a lot of American's who go overseas to Europe pretend to be Canadian. They love us over there. XP

Please feel free to do so! I like making friends! ^_^

Thread 8

coriopsis July 17 2009, 06:33:24 UTC

Poor seekers had a hard time of it, huh? But they got together in the end, and that's what counts.

Did you know that your story is up to 146 pages? Long!story is long.

Sorry to hear about your great-aunt.

sanjuno July 17 2009, 15:16:39 UTC

Yeah they did, but yes, they did! XP And it does. Nyah.

... I hadn't actually checked for a while. I know that I divided it up into about five documents when my original file hit 70 pages... but really? I've doubled the size of the story. Whoa. And I've been saying it the whole time, epic!seeker-palooza fic is epic.

Meh. Thanks. ^_^

magni_zeal July 17 2009, 07:16:58 UTC

*snuggles* That is so sweet *purrs happily. And for what it matters, if you put it all together in... well, whatever order you like, I'd be willing to check it all over for grammar errors, and any glaring non-sequiturs that I see. There's a very large chance I'll have plenty of time, even if it is as large as Coriopsis says. *smiles*
>.> *sneak glomps Seekers*

sanjuno July 17 2009, 15:13:15 UTC

*Snuggles back* I'm glad you liked it! ^_^ And actually, I did a read through of all my pre-war pieces and edited out all of the little typos I found. I was up until 2am, but at least it's not bothering me anymore. XP But it is a very large file... still, if you're in earnest, when it gets to the point that I'm putting it all together for a comprehensive posting, I'll give you a ping for a double check on the grammer/typos/what-have-you.

magni_zeal July 17 2009, 19:03:16 UTC

If there's one thing I learned from my own fics, it's that there is always something you missed. So, yeah, I'm in earnest. I'll likely quite enjoy it, too.

And not to be annoying, but have you noticed my 'Raj is no longer suicidal? >.>

sanjuno July 17 2009, 19:13:07 UTC

I knooooow. *whines* It drives me crazy sometimes too, because I'll be all like "Okay, it's done!" then I read over what I just posted and immediately spot a half dozen typos. *headdesk* Right then, I'll keep you in mind when the time comes. It's not likely to be for a while yet though...

I have indeed noticed. I'll be getting around to commenting in a bit. XP

Thread 10

kittona July 17 2009, 07:27:35 UTC

This was lovely! I was a little confused as to why Starscream was that scared of finding his trinemates though... And was he upset about Skyfire specifically or just loosing his position over the whole incident?

I liked the scene where Warp was dancing. In a fic I'm working on Warp was a dancer for a bit.

I loved this bit:“Thundercracker.” Starscream said slowly, “I hope you don’t mind terribly, but I need to kill your wingmate now.”

“I’ll help.” Thundercracker said with a low growl from his place at the bottom of the pile.

“There, you see? You’re already sharing thoughts and emotions! Bonding’s just a formality at this rate!” Skywarp observed

Skywarp acts like it's a difficult thing to share the sentiment of wanting to kill him...*snicker*

sanjuno July 17 2009, 15:09:26 UTC

Actually, Starscream was more afraid of not finding his trinemates. I hope I got it across, but Starscream has had quite a large number of Seekers come up to him going "Trinemate!" only they aren't Starscream's trinemates. So Screamer's got a habit of bolting when people try to court him.

Well Skywarp needs to do something with all that energy! And my Skywarp isn't really the sit still or mercanary type. He's more "Admire me! I'm pretty!" than anything else. XP

I'm glad you like it. ^_^

And yeah, Skywarp is a bit of a goofball. XD