"I am SHE-RA!"

[sanjuno]

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: Sunstorm doesn't like like Outsiders. Not at all.
Timeline: The other parts are listed here.

Comments

[mimi_sardinia]

Aww! I like this calmer Sunstorm! Is it because he had the support of Starscream and the other Decepticon Seekers? I could see that that may be something that would have that effect (I mean, how much support did Sunstorm have in Dreamwave, from his "brother"? Knowing standard canon characterisation, probably not much, if at all!).

Plus I like that this Sunstorm seems to have taken up a position in Vos as a priest, it's appropriate for his religiousness.

Can I nitpick a little?

For megavorn upon megavorn I served the Slagmaker.”

That might be a bit of an exaggeration of how long Starscream was a Decepticon, a megavorn is 8.3 million years and the war has only been going for about 9 million, so one megavorn is most of the war (it's why one ficlet prompt I gave someone said that Magnus hadn't seen Optimus for "half a megavorn").

[sanjuno]

Calmer Sunstorm is only calmer in certain instances. You'll understand better once you read todays post and even better than that once I get the part where Sunstorm meets Soundwave written. XP But yeah, living in Vos and haveing emotional support has helped Sunstorm out a lot in this 'verse.

Yeppers. Sunstorm is the High Priest in Vos. He likes it. XD

Sure, go ahead.

Oops... *edits!*

Yarr. You're right about that, thanks for catching it! It's fixed now, but if you see anything else that makes you go "huh?" please be sure to let me know! ^_^

*bowing before the brilliance that you are*

[jazas_art]

You, have just made my day.

And I really, really needed it to be made.

And, uh-oh, I just de-lurked. Well, had to happen sometime. *shrug*

A good friend, now disappeared, pointed me in your direction just before she left, and I've been reading and re-reading your works and squeeing that much!

So much, that I've found myself not being able to write anything coherent.

This is so far beyond great, I just can't put it to the proper words.

Re: *bowing before the brilliance that you are*

[sanjuno]

I like making peoples days. It's a hobby of mine. ^_^

Yay! I caught a lurker! It's my first time. XD

Wow, sorry about losing your friend, but I'm glad that you like my fic. ^_^ Bah, coherency is overrated anyway. Babbling works just as well, and the words you've used so far get the idea across well enough. XP

[sanjuno]

Yay! *goes to pet dragons*

[catraven]

A fine chapter, as usual. :) Sunstorm seems just fine to me - I'm looking forward to his backstory.

And I clicked the dragons - can't let 'em die!

[sanjuno]

Thankie kindly for the comment. ^_^ the Sunstorm here is a lo more... settled than the Sunstorm we see in canon or the backstory. XP Speaking of which, the first bit of Sunstorm's Backstory is up now.

Yay! Thanks for the clicks, all of my eggs hatched. No dieing today! XD

[black_shiro]

Huum i really like Sunstorm's speech pattern :) And Star sounds so old and wise in this chapter LoL

[sanjuno]

You aren't the ony one to tell me that, so I suppose I've done something right! XP And Starscream is milking the the fact that he's older than Sunstorm by several vorns for all he's worth. XD