vintage hiram

Nov 29, 2003 16:43

i found some stuff i wrote in class when i was around twelve or thirteen, back in puerto rico. it's kinda embarrassing, but kinda funny. it's pretty bad... i sound like i'm five. here it goes. this is undeniable proof that i've always been a lazy fuck, and that my frankness began earlier than i thought it did (note that i was pretty shy and that the teacher would read this). this was originally in spanish.

Hiram Molina 18
Soliloquy
Another day... waking up to go to school, always the same routine. Entirely boring except when one talks something which they do not allow. Always the same _all_ day working on assignments, bored sitting at the desk. Every day of the week, I wish it were the weekend without worries except when some evil teachers give us too much homework. It is unnecessary because one already understands the lesson. It would be great if there would be no school and we would already be smart. Sometimes I think that it is not necessary because it could be that i only will like the arts and be an artisan and gain my life with that.

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think about that for a second. i get to write a soliloquy, and the first thing that pops into my head is complaining about work. shows you how little i've changed.

all grammar and spelling mistakes should be assumed to be those of the original time of writing.

okay, there's another one. this one's better. when you read it, imagine yourself as a teacher reading a twelve year old's (i know i was younger here than in the previous one) in-class work. shows you i played way too many video games. i wrote this one in english. man, this is embarrassing.

Hiram Molina #21 March 11, '97
Choose one and make one:
Myth, legend, fable and folktale

myth:
There was once a place hidden by the gods, where the power of Psico (god of mind), Phisi (god of power), and Philo (god of emotions) were placed (their names in greek are, ... [[here i wrote the names using greek characters... what a nerd]]). Mortals were born with the hunger for this power... but souch an "evolved" life like the gods didn't felt temtation for evil, so they knew their responsibility for soch power. If a human got this power he could control it could destroy the world with hate itself and ancient demons would be awaken to destroy the world...
Once upon a time there was a young adventurer who who was driven by hatred emotions and he thought hate was more powerflul than love.
Then one day he runned away from his family and saw a cave very small, but he fitted in it. He entered and saw a great place where, power, knowledge, and emotions where controlled by him. He created a world by himself creating demons and hate at his pleasure.
Then he thought that one world wasn't enough, and since he thought evil was stronger than good he thought his army would destroy this world and rule both of them (worlds). But in our world people notice evil flowing from the "gate" of both worlds and 7 wise men sealed it and called it "underworld", and bad people where sent by the gods there but they were unaware of the breakage of the ancient seal.

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wow. can you guess what game i was playing at the time? it's an almost complete rip-off of zelda: a link to the past. turn the game on and don't press start. you'll get to see the story. it's basically that, but they don't say the stuff about the triforce. i'm not sure if they say one man did all that or many. i know they did say it was one man (ganondorf) later in the comic strip run by nintendo power (which i have in book format still). this is pretty pathetic. all i did was take a video game story and change some details. i thought 'ancient demons would be awaken' was funny. okay, i'm done. i apologize to those of you whom expected an entry with a little more significance. i'll probably do that soon. later.
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