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[salerate]

"How tedious is a guilty conscience!" John Webster

Once, when Rachel was a child of about 8 or 9 years old, there was this other girl in her class that was very talented, more talented than her she had to admit. Her name was Marise.

The teacher would always stop by Marise to give her a compliment or to take her as an example for the other children to

Comments

[mauders]

I really liked this. Quite a different portrayal of Rachel but quite convincing. I liked your observations and analysis of Rachel's motivations.

Love the quotes at the beginning of each chapter. Looking forward to seeing how this develops.

[salerate]

Well, thank you!
I felt like exploiting the "dark side" of Rachel would be interesting.