The Last Straw - One Shot

Nov 21, 2010 16:47

Title: The Last Straw
Fandom(s): U-KISS
Pairing(s): broken!Kemaru, 2Ki, Kevin/OC
Rating: PG-13 w/ mentions of NC-17
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 2,742 words

Warnings: Awful!English, Nonsensical!Story
Author's Notes: This might sound harsh on Kiseop and Kibum, I don’t know yet. I’m just horribly annoyed by 2Ki, do not mind me. The ending is actually ( Read more... )

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 08:51:33 UTC
Spot for thyfloatinglily.
This is what happens when 2Ki gets on my nerves.
Sighs, I'm sounding too bitter for my own good :(

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thyfloatinglily December 5 2010, 17:39:42 UTC
Oh gosh I hate you... Cus you just made me cry. Like freaking seriously!!! I am like questioning my own sanity now thank you!!

This was just seriously too good, too angst, too awesome not to cry at.
And yes I swear you are getting me to like kemaru more and more through your angst fics.

"This was the fifty-seventh time he couldn’t see a second shadow beside his own. "

Ow just plain pain. Like oh goshhh. I think your writings of kemaru is finally getting to me through all the angsty fics >< but this line was like BAM! the pain right in front of your eyes. I totally feel it ( ... )

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s2_otter December 6 2010, 02:50:14 UTC
I love you too, honey <3~
I made you cry? Come here for a hug /huggles
/needs to question my sanity now too :D

Awww, you really did? Is this your first cry fic? :D
Ikr, I write better in angst, I don't know why. Fluff is full of dialogues :(

Haha, I like that line too ^^ Don't know, it just came to me XD

Kevin didn't really self harm...he just found someone that he was fine with but not exactly in love withhhhh, that's not self harm :(
I don't want Kibum hurting him anymore, that's why, I'm sort of being nice to him :(

I didddd want to make Kiseop the bad guy. But then I'm like, I love him as an individual just hate his presence in 2Ki pairing soooooo...gave him a reason to back down?

Loll. IKR. Channeling to fanfic writing is the only way for me lol.
Do not mind the screams you hear

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 08:52:13 UTC
Spot for swimmingcheese.
Meh, hope you like this despite the angst :(

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 12:28:43 UTC
Go sleep, baby D:
I love you too~!

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 08:53:50 UTC
Spot for kpophearts.
Don't know if you would want to read this kind of Kemaru but here's your spot, sweetie.
Don't be too affected by me :)

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kpophearts November 21 2010, 13:53:39 UTC
My thoughts EXACTLY.
If I could choose any fic that could best describe what I'm feeling, this would be it. I mean, Kibum doesn't realize how important Kevin is in his life. And Kevin's like, just sitting there, being all happy and bleh. And Kiseop, he's just, IDK. Bottom line is I HATE KI BROTHERS.

If I could print this out and throw it in Kibum's face I would do it even though I love him.

I'm currently writing a oneshot fic but I don't know how to end it. But I would try not to make it broken kemaru but not happy kemaru either. And my chaptered fic, I don't want to continue it first. When I get my happy kemaru vibes back, I'd start continuing it.

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 13:57:02 UTC
<33
IKR. MTE TOO.
I HATE KI BROTHERS WITH A PASSION.
NOT THEM AS INDIVIDUALS BUT THEM AS A PAIR.

OMG I WOULD TOO.
But I think it's best to translate it first lol.

Aww, honey. /huggles.
I know what you feel, but lol, I still want to finish my Nanowrimo =="

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kpophearts November 21 2010, 14:19:14 UTC
THEN AGAIN, EXACTLY MY THOUGHTS. I don't hate Kibum. I don't hate Kiseop. I HATE KI BROTHERS. But they can be hateful because of what they're doing. But I don't hate them. ASHDFSG
LOL You do get me, right?

LOL Google translate. I bet he wouldn't understand a thing. Better yet, read it with Kevin so that they can reflect together.

HOMG. You have to finish it~~ o_o /downloads all kemaru videos for you

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capturedhear_t November 21 2010, 10:23:02 UTC
Broken Kemaru breaks me. ):

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 10:56:07 UTC
It breaks me too :( Esp Ki Brothers D:
Sorry for spreading the angst :(

Thank you for reading and commenting though, bb <3~

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capturedhear_t November 21 2010, 10:57:27 UTC
And there was very little Kemaru at the fanmeet. If I can say, there's like, no Kemaru.
But Kibum hugged Kiseop and lifted him. D:

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 10:59:06 UTC
I didn't go :(
The only Kemaru I found in a few fancams I saw (meh, I don't want to see anymore. Ki Brothers practically isolated themselves from the other five) is that they were giving the same presents, cologne(?)
Why did Kibum lift Kiseop? :(!

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kpopsinger501 November 21 2010, 10:33:56 UTC
This is so sad!!!!!!! I'm like crying my eyes out!!!! I have read like 5 sad fics just now! Like right before I'm gonna sleep! My face is coin to be so bloated in the morning.... Waaaaaaaaaa. Kkkeeeevvvviiiinnnnnnn~~~~~~ T_T

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s2_otter November 21 2010, 10:57:04 UTC
T____T
Sorry baby, I didn't know there's so many sad fics ><"
Aha, sorry for making your face bloated tomorrow morning =X
Yeah, poor Kevin :(

Thank you for reading and commenting though~

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