Sequence of Upsets: A Heisei Kumi Fanfic (23/23)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Keito/Shoon (Shoto?), with some side Ariyama and Chiitaro
Rating: R, for violence and dark themes
Warnings: Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Summary: Keito has been in the Heisei Kumi for nearly 2 years now. He has a wonderful boyfriend, and he's become a strong fighter

Comments

[kiwi_tan]

Guess who's back? back again. Kiwi's back rUN FOR YOUR LIFE BEFORE YOU HAVE TOE EXPERIENCE YET ANOTHER LONG-ASS COMMENT.

I guess I have to go from chapter 3 becAUSE THAT'S WHEN SHIT REALLY STARTS TO STIR:

~ Daiki immediately pulled himself to his knees on top of Kamiki, arm pulled back to deliver the intense frenzy of punches he always had saved for occasions like this one. Same Daiki, same - I must say this image is very strong like, with Daiki's fighting style I'm guessing he's quite a quick paced fighter when he punches etc? okAY BUT THEN POOR DAIKI HOLY SHIT. Poor guy I felt so bad for him, when that sorta thing happens by accident - your heart can't help but go out to the lil dragon ;; evERYTHING WENT INTERESTING and then when Yamada and Daiki stare at each other for like an eternity I was expecting one of them to run out, but no, they were dragged out lmao - I kinda wonder, if they hadn't been dragged away by the other members what do you think would've ended up happening between them?

~ "Uh huh. Look at you, pretending to be

[kiwi_tan]

~ "So you're telling me that I've been sleeping with a minor?" You have no idea how much this cracked me up like - Shoon has killed and beaten up and done all sorts of Yakuza-like things but the prospect of sleeping with a minor oH GOD I'M BREAKING THE LAW NO (His logic makes me lol I'm sorry)

~Urgh also Hikaru is so cuTE - does he know that he actually has feelings for Keito or does he pretend its purely platonic?

~ The convo when Shoon and Keito are calling out to eachother in chapter 7 while fighting off random enemies is so cute idk man it kinda reminded me of pirates of the Caribbean (in a good way)

~ Shoon is also boss as fuck man

~ What happened to Keito's nightmares? did they just dwindle and go away over time or did he just unconsciously completely forget about them with everything going on with Shoon?

~ Chinen immediately turned his attention to his boyfriend, a warm smile on his face, and Keito was shocked by the complete one-eighty. Chinen was completely different around Ryutaro. He seemed warmer, happier, and more

[ryosukekoibito]

~Poor Daiki is right. I feel like Yamada, and the other boys, but especially Yamada (and Inoo) have really softened him up a lot, he's more open to feeling than he was when he was younger, and he cares more about how the rest of them perceive him. He wants them to love him, and he wants to love himself, but murdering someone, even by accident, can really put a dent in your self image, and can really change the way people perceive you. That was why he was distancing himself from Yamada so much after Kamiki died. He had this fear that maybe he wouldn't love him anymore; wouldn't want him anymore, that he'd managed to drive Yamada away, and he was regretting it, and mourning, and punishing himself for it. And that fear extended to all of them, but once Yamada had convinced him that he wasn't going anywhere, Daiki managed to eventually, with Yamada's help, come to realize that they all still loved him

[ryosukekoibito]

~So with the Wakaba their whole thing was that word had kinda gotten around that Chinen and Ryu were a thing, and they were going to hurt the kumi by stealing and beating up the leader's boyfriend. They didn't know that Ryu had run away, and they didn't believe him when he told them that no one would come for him. They just beat him up, fed him inadequately, and tried to get him to spill inside information about the heisei kumi

[kiwi_tan]

~ Aww man my feelings, once Shoon dies, will Hikaru ever make a move in the future? or is this something I will find out/look forward to in future kumi!au fics?

~ Ah I see, that makes a lot of sense, I couldn't quite appreciate that as much as I would like because my dreams are all extremely vivid (and can be quite dark) so I find it difficult to appreciate how dreams are different for different people

~ Once Ryutaro comes back from being missing etc, does Chinen struggle with guilt and try to make it up to Ryutaro or is that something they get over quite quickly? Or will I find this all out again in a future part of the series?~ Huh, that makes sense as to why he was more tired out then after they did the dirty on their anniversary (I wasn't sure if it was his illness tiring him out or what

[ryosukekoibito]

~You're not getting anything out of me about the whole Hikaru/Keito/Shoon mess until after the next fic

[kiwi_tan]

~DAMN I'M SO EXCITED FOR HOW DO SCARS FADE? IS GONNA TURN OUT U HAVE NO IDEA

~Ah I see I can totally appreciate that, I have some weird-ass dreams but I can remember most of them in the morning (although I never write them down which I want to start doing)

~Chiitaro is so AWWWWW I can't deal ((you'll hear more of my loVE FOR THEM in my next comment lmao))

~It's alright, it was a while back and I was quite young at the time so I can't remember too much of it anyway. I'm also sorry for your losses, life sucks sometimes :(

~AWWW MAN THAT'S CUTE I LOVE THEM METAPHORS

~*so excited u have no idea*

YOU ARE I PROMISE THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS TAKING THE TIME TO REPLY TO ME ILY *runs away*