Among the Stars, a Lone Breeze (CCM, Limited Edition Flavor, Strawberry Banana + Cherry)

[likelolwhat]

'Verse: Natural Forces
Challenges/Toppings/Extras: Chocolate Chip Mint #13 (dazzling), Lemon Meringue Pie/Limited Edition Flavor #5 (fast), Strawberry Banana #3 (hallucination) + Cherry (oh dear lord what have I written now)
Rating: PG (because… strange)
Title: Among the Stars, a Lone Breeze
Summary: For Nimue, there is a monster outside… and a

Comments

[blackflamingo77]

Don't you just love when you stop writing, sit back, and realize you wrote something that scars the living daylights out of you? I try really hard not to psychoanalyze what the things I write say about my mental health.

After this one, I would advise you to do the same. ;)

But wow, this one really had a haunting quality to it. Keeping it in first person added a surrealism to it and the whole thing felt very lyrical.

"I saw him within as much as without." Was probably my favorite line of the whole thing.

[likelolwhat]

Oh, I'm quite certain I'm too far gone at this point. ;P Thank you! I love that you're going back and reading the slightly older ones too.

[blackflamingo77]

There's no such thing as "too far gone" just the difference between "tilt your head and stare" crazy and "yay! I've got my own padded room!" crazy.

I'd say "you're welcome" but it's all your fault. I read one and then I had to know more, so I read another, but that only made me want to read more, so I read another, and another, etc. Your stuff is amazing, so I want to keep reading it.