Comments | runaway_tales: Cheeseburger 4: Debrief

bookblather in runaway_tales

Cheeseburger 4: Debrief

Nov 15, 2011 20:36

Title: Debrief
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Cheeseburger 4 (kthxbai), hot fudge (FRANK), pocky, malt (gandolforf's easter egg: Shiver away; I thought the action was real. Somewhere I know that's just the way you are - "Shiver", by Motion City Soundtrack), rainbow sprinkles ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] malt, [extra] pocky, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] cheeseburger

Comments 12

five_steps_back November 16 2011, 01:51:33 UTC

Oh my god, douche. Someone needs a kick in the face.

This is really well done.

bookblather November 18 2011, 05:50:54 UTC

He really does. And a kick in the nuts, too.

Thank you!

(The comment has been removed)

bookblather November 18 2011, 05:51:58 UTC

He is. He's a sociopath. I think I only just realized it.

Thank you!

sarcasticsra November 16 2011, 04:11:18 UTC

...um, the fuck, Frank.

Well done.

bookblather November 18 2011, 05:52:15 UTC

Seriously.

Thank you!

nathskywalker November 16 2011, 20:00:07 UTC

i don't know what to say. A kick in the nuts wouldn't suffice. I thought his wife was bad! Poor Danny and Michael!

bookblather November 18 2011, 05:52:35 UTC

They really lost out in the whole parents lottery. Although at least Rebecca was trying.

Thank you!

anonymous November 16 2011, 22:13:35 UTC

Ouch, the misogyny burns! Definitely a lot of interesting things going on for only 100 words.

Also, present tense represent!