Submission

[darkfaerieclaw]

Title: Submission
Story Continuity: The Lethean Glamour
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 8: an inconvenience, Papaya 4: have it your way
Extra: Pocky, Butterscotch (Apollo Merces' ascension feast/Valentio is 17)
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Summary: Valentio lives.

Comments

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you very much indeed! I'm pleased you like it.

you describe an iron-fisted ruler in so few words in ways that make me green with envy.

(Will never stop being flattered by comments to this effect. Never. <3)

[toxic_fairie]

I really love that last line! I wish I had a more constructive comment but I think I'm going to have to read your other stuff first since I am a noob. :)

[darkfaerieclaw]

Hey, no worries. I'm glad you seemed to like what you've read. :)

Welcome to the comm! Enjoy yourself, there's some really fantastic writers here.

[draloreshimare]

I chuckled at the second sentence. Because really, that's what it comes down to sometimes, right?

[darkfaerieclaw]

Indeed so. ^^

Thank you for reading/commenting! Good to know you're back.

[bookblather]

Valentio is awesome, and wow, that end-- so very well done. Especially the lines about men with pointy sticks and ornamenting pikes. Excellent job.

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

[ichthusfish]

Good plan, Valentino. I like the last line. Nicely written :)

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! That's very good to hear.