Comments | runaway_tales: Butter Rum 10, Pineapple 1, Pomegranate 3

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Butter Rum 10, Pineapple 1, Pomegranate 3

Jul 28, 2011 23:03

Author: Casey
Story: Taking Root (sidestory)
Challenge: Butter Rum 10 (swashbuckling), Pineapple 17 (don’t do anything I wouldn’t do), Pomegranate 3 (transformation)
Toppings/Extras: Caramel, Chopped Nuts (unfortunately, Dean and Resh’s lives are separated by at least a hundred years, plus TR’verse), Pocky Chain, Gummy Bunnies (Origfic Bingo: ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [topping] caramel, [topping] gummy bunnies, [author] casey, [challenge] pineapple, [extra] pocky chain, [challenge] pomegranate, [challenge] butter rum

Comments 4

kay_brooke August 1 2011, 16:18:47 UTC

The rules are great (and useful)! I love how dialogue-heavy this is. It's just the characters speaking for themselves and they all have great voices and interaction.

niee87 August 2 2011, 01:37:17 UTC

Haha, yeah, Resh does try and be useful even when inflating his own ego ;) I debated trying to show more of them actually practicing but decided the dialogue added more to it :D I'm so glad you liked it!

smoothiegarten August 3 2011, 02:06:51 UTC

THIS IS AMAZING. Resh's rules are gold, and I think my favorite bits were the two pockies about punching. Outstanding. I'm so glad you wrote it.

niee87 August 4 2011, 01:52:28 UTC

:D :D I'm so glad you liked it! I had a ton of fun writing it. Dean's got a mean fist once he learns how (in all narratives!). I'm so glad the idea came to me :D