Pocky Chain - Moonwalk

[shayna611]

Pineapple #18. Hindsight is 20/20 and Soy #8. 臭いものにわふたおする
Pocky Chain with Hot Fudge, Whipped Cream, and Malt
Story : knights & necromancers
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1251
Word Count : 699
Malt Prompt : Summer 2010 - One, two, three. Boom.
My Treat (Falootin) : 臭いものにわふたおする kusai mono ni wa futa o suru / cover foul smelling things - The young

Comments

[shayna611]

never can let him catch a break

thanks :)

[nathskywalker]

your description of it being "Kairn torture in reverse" was extremely accurate and I love the flow of it, especially the beginnings (the chronological one and the end you started wtih).

[shayna611]

the backwards chain was the one I wanted to do most, and when I looked over my prompts and saw these two it just clicked.

thanks :)

[aproberts]

This is an awesome chain, especially as it can be read backward and forward. I have to admit when I saw the option for a backwards chain in the Summer Challenge, I was kind of wondering how it would play out. But you did a very good job.

[shayna611]

Thanks! I figured it would be an interesting thing to see what people did with it, and it was fun to try.

[hi_falootin]

lol oh man, when only reida and sethan were in the first bit I was like "...is kairn in the trunk?". and then he was, of course XD The reverse order worked splendidly...the fact that the slime was once an er, moving thing. And it only stinks, pity!!

bombs that can run around...idk if I can get behind those ;)

[shayna611]

Of course he's in the trunk! ;)

you wouldn't want to get in front of them either

Thanks! :)

[hi_falootin]

I LAUGHED.

[shayna611]

I couldn't help myself

[ichthusfish]

LMAO! You so need to find a use for running bombs now! That's awesome! =D

[shayna611]

Well, they did make use of those sitting Kairn bombs, but yes running bombs would be very handy.

thanks! :)