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niee87 in runaway_tales

Sea Salt 1 & Butter Rum 6

May 10, 2011 23:18

Author: Casey
Story: Shifts: Index - Post-Shift
Challenge: Sea Salt 1 (ocean/sea) & Butter Rum 6 (crow's nest)
Toppings & Extras: Chopped Nuts (Pirates Ahoy!), Caramel, Malt (Christmas picture from ichthusfish!), Cherry (first person), Gummy Bunnies (Three Word Wednesday: Grace, Jitter, Thin)
Word Count: 825
Rating: PG
Summary: Our intrepid ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [topping] gummy bunnies, [challenge] sea salt, [challenge] butter rum, [author] casey

Comments 6

kay_brooke May 11 2011, 14:31:53 UTC

Yay, pirate AU! Very cute scene. :)

niee87 May 29 2011, 03:15:03 UTC

Thanks :D

smoothiegarten May 13 2011, 20:01:35 UTC

*SNERK* Hello there, weird shippy vibes. Also, LOL Mariah and Josh are Drew's in-laws and also his cousins whaaaaaat

Um, anyway, I really like this and think it's cute but one thing you could've added was a better description of the setting. Where are they? Why are they there? I AM CONFUSED AND WANT TO KNOW MORE. <3

niee87 May 29 2011, 03:15:47 UTC

Ugh, I know! The shippy vibes just about kill me! Well, we knew we had a really messed up family tree ;)

Ah, I can definitely do setting - will try and be more specific in the next piece, whenever that might come about.

ninablues May 24 2011, 16:06:03 UTC

Waaah, I love Muppets Treasure Island so hard! It's possibly what got me so into pirates in the first place. XD The opening sequence fills me with joy.

AAANYWAY! Even in all her youthful obnoxiousness, I enjoyed Mariah charging around in this piece and Ellen is still so Ellen... I just love her so much. Apologising for something that was basically not even close to her fault. I think she and Victor would be good friends. I'm looking forwards to more of this!

niee87 May 29 2011, 03:17:15 UTC

I know! It's the best! (And Marina has never seen it! I am still all aghast about this and I've now known for almost a month). I plan on remedying this when she comes to visit this summer, though!

Mariah is very youthfully obnoxious but also very used to the ship. I enjoyed writing Ellen in this because that's really how she is - and she and Victor would most likely make great friends!

There should be at least one more during the course of finishing Butter Rum :D

Thanks for reading!