Girl!Kairn AU - Part 1

Mar 21, 2011 10:06

Blueberry Yogurt #3. A Secret, Pineapple #22. If You Can't Beat 'em, Join 'em,
& Soft Serve 1/50 : Pear #17. Better or Worse
with Whipped Cream, Hot Fudge, Cookie Crumbs, Chopped Nuts, Malt,
and a Brownie
Story : knights & necromancers
Rating : R - maybe? some violence, some implied sex, nothing terribly graphic
Timeframe : 1230's-40's
Word Count ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [topping] cookie crumbs, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna, [challenge] pineapple, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] brownie, [challenge] blueberry yogurt, [challenge] soft serve : 50

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nathskywalker March 21 2011, 21:44:51 UTC
I don't even know what to say. This was great and so much fun to read. You hit all the spots that seem really important to male Kairn that would be different for Karin and the huge change in Sethan had he grown up rooming with a girl.

I missed Reida in this but I guess there would be no room for her if Berwyk is only accepting boys and there's enough trouble already without Reida in this. I thought the other boys would find out about Karin in the scene with the dress which is even worse for Karin because if someone finds out, she's pretty much dead. Sethan being so open about the relationship and apparently meaning it, is really surprising and refreshing. I don't know why.

This feels like a good point to end this though you know I'm looking for part two. I want to see if Sethan still intends to have a child in this AU and there is so much to come. You covered their youth very well and I enjoyed the bit about Sethan and Karin being very open with each other when it came to her body, with him tying her breasts down every morning until one day, it's different. I could feel them growing up in this and I had completely forgotten that the voice (and possibly facial hair) would become an issue.

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shayna611 March 21 2011, 21:57:49 UTC
Thank you! :)

I had to steal bits and pieces out of canon and twist them here and there. Thankfully, I think the characters all played nice with their altered roles. It didn't actually feel like too much of a stretch.

You better believe Reida's coming! And I couldn't possibly have girl Kairn without addressing the baby issue ;)

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