Comments | runaway_tales: late vanilla and chocolate with malt

ninablues in runaway_tales

late vanilla and chocolate with malt

Jan 03, 2011 15:17

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Goddess
Rating: G
Challenge: Vanilla #30: cloud/star-gazing, Chocolate #21: luck
Toppings/Extras: malt
Wordcount: 374
Summary: Isaac Prowse feels that he has all the bad luck.
Notes: ARGH I just found this final Vanilla piece waiting to be posted. *facepalm* I’m so sorry, it was in the wrong place! Now I’ ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 17

kaitygirl88 January 3 2011, 15:25:33 UTC

Ah, if only mental letters to the dieties worked so well. The last line made me lol because I couldn't help thinking that Isaac is going to say that a lot in their relationship. XD

Great piece, thanks for sharing!

ninablues January 3 2011, 15:34:52 UTC

Mental letters are always such a let down. XD Thanks so much!

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ninablues January 3 2011, 17:25:47 UTC

All I want is a room somewhere/ Far away from the cold night air...

That is a song that gets stuck in my head very easily. XD My friend was in a production of it last year and sang it all of the frigging time. Yep, the little ruffian has come a long way. :) Thanks!

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ninablues January 3 2011, 17:58:31 UTC

I can imagine it getting stronger when his emotions are running high. I keep referring to it as cockney which is a bit naughty as I envision his accent more specifically as a north London lilt (as opposed to the east) but... it's the closest I can get in a single word. XD

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nathskywalker January 3 2011, 19:04:30 UTC

I feel sort of bad for Isaac because I can imagine how much it would suck to be in a situation like that but at the same time I'm grinning and feeling all happy because of how complicated his life will get because of it. And maybe because I love Adele and Isaac together. Most likely the last bit.

ninablues January 3 2011, 19:10:18 UTC

Oh yeah, Isaac's in a world of trouble and he knows it. Thanks!

gildedspine January 3 2011, 20:57:44 UTC

I love that last line.

"God help him."

XD

ninablues January 3 2011, 23:13:50 UTC

It's all too true, ain't it? XD Thanks!

smoothiegarten January 3 2011, 23:04:15 UTC

Oh, Isaac. :( Sorry, dude, you're in way over your head here. Luckily, this one's going to turn out great! Eventually. <3 I love the descriptions of the way Adele looks in the light.

ninablues January 3 2011, 23:14:22 UTC

Thanks! I was tapping into the ol' Prowse brain for the descriptions of evil goddess!Adele. XD