Vanilla Custard #12, Gingerbread #13, w/ Hot Fudge, Butterscotch, Pocky, & Sprinkles - Cat and Mouse

[crooked_loss]

Author: askingxalice 
Title: Cat and Mouse
Summary: Cliff decides on Sage.
Story: Phase
Timeline: April 1987 - Sage is 18, Cliff is 32.
Challenge: Vanilla Custard #12 (I can hear the devil call my name. - Hopeless by Breaking Benjamin), Gingerbread #13 (big bad wolf)
Toppings/Extras: Hot Fudge (Cliff), Butterscotch, Pocky, Sprinkles (Rayne’s parents)
Word Count: 100

Comments

[sarcasticsra]

...creepy! And intriguing, too. Brr.

[crooked_loss]

Cliff is probably the most vile of the bad parents in my story. :/ Considering he's up against Sarah and Angie's parents, and Oz's parents, and Andy and Adri's dad, that's... saying something.

Luckily, I don't have to write about him much. He only came in contact with Sage once, but it was still enough to pretty much effect the rest of her life.

Thanks for reading!

[niee87]

O.o goodness! Cliff is more than a little creepy and I feel bad for Sage. Nice job with the atmosphere of this piece!

[crooked_loss]

He's the worst, he really is. I might write more about him, but I don't know I'll write more with him. Getting in his head makes me feel like I need a really long shower to get the 'ick' off of me.

Thanks for reading!

[bookblather]

...uh, jerk. What even.

I really like the way you just sort of slid it in there, though. The way the description moved into creepy. Great job!

[crooked_loss]

No, no, calling him a jerk is an insult to jerks. The guy is nothing short of vile and loathsome. Seriously, writing him creeps me out so much.

Thanks for reading!

[smoothiegarten]

*pause* *reads again*

What exactly does Cliff do for a living? Just curious because of the body guard and all.

(so creepy omg.)

[crooked_loss]

He's a politician, and possibly the most vile butterscotch character I have. :/ You can find out a little more about him under Rayne's section in my Cast of Characters.

Thanks for reading!