Banana Nut and Chopped Nuts

Oct 13, 2010 23:04

Author: AP Roberts
Challenge: Banana Nut #1 - gear
Topping/Extra: Chopped Nuts, Pocky, Cherry (my first attempt at Steampunk), Sprinkles (Jack is a minor character)
Rating: G
Word Count: 95
Genre: Steam Punk
World: Innis Seun(AU)
Title: The Machine
Summary: Jack builds a new machine. One that hasn't exploded yet.

Back to School Challenge for Chopped Nuts

Jack fiddled with the gearshifts... )

[topping] sprinkles, [topping] chopped nuts, [extra] pocky, [topping] cherry, [challenge] banana nut

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aproberts October 14 2010, 02:31:05 UTC
I take it you're a fan of steampunk? I hope I don't disappoint you too much with my attempts.

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aproberts October 14 2010, 02:54:06 UTC
Thank you. =) I will definitely have to go through the archives and check out your writing as I think I've only read a piece or two, and if I've read more, well, I'll read it again to get out of the fantasy mindset and into the steampunk one. =)

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ninablues October 14 2010, 06:54:28 UTC
I love steampunk also, although my RaTs writing is nothing to do with it. Very interesting new story you have here, I loved Meghan's clever banter. I hope that Jack doesn't give up; I have a feeling he won't. ;)

Banana Nut is definitely the right flavour for a steampunk story.

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aproberts October 15 2010, 02:00:34 UTC
Thank you for reading. As for Jack giving up... well he might for awhile. Then he'll sneak back into his workshop when no one else is looking. =)

Banana Nut is the only reason for this AU. I have to admit I was kind of wondering how to do my chopped nuts until I saw this flavour.

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ichthusfish October 15 2010, 01:52:36 UTC
But here he was, the machine was finished and nothing had exploded.

LOL! Classic line! Very funny. Maybe he should actually attempt to build something designed to explode that secretly isn't for an exploding purpose, then it might turn out ok, whichever way. Yay for Steampunk :)

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aproberts October 15 2010, 02:02:22 UTC
I would say that could work, but with Jack's luck, probably not. Though it would be interesting to see how this plan would backfire. Thanks for reading. =)

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