Cherry Vanilla/Guava/Trail Mix smoothie

Oct 01, 2010 11:09

Authors: Marina and Casey
Story: Shifts universe (post-Shifts)
Challenge: Cherry Vanilla 2 (there’s something in the air) [Marina]; Guava 14 (the best is yet to come), Trail Mix 7 (hallway) [Casey]
Toppings/Extras: Caramel, Sprinkles, Smoothie
Word Count: 650
Rating: G
Summary: Grayson barges in on Ellen and Henry at the end of the work day.
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[challenge] cherry vanilla, [topping] sprinkles, [extra] smoothie, [topping] caramel, [challenge] guava, [challenge] trail mix, [author] casey, [author] marina

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ninablues October 1 2010, 18:59:18 UTC
I absolutely love the banter between them, especially when Grayson firs comes into the office. Dialog-heavy pieces aren't always easy to pull off, but this one is punchy and tongue-in-cheek and was a real pleasure to read! These guys have some real character, I can tell already.

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smoothiegarten October 3 2010, 00:04:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D Casey and I have been having quite a lot of fun with these two, and especially Grayson. He doesn't take anything too seriously, and Ellen's a nice balance for that.

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smoothiegarten October 3 2010, 00:06:31 UTC
Little Nate makes me squee a little inside. :D Giving Grayson a kid was definitely one of our better decisions. Thank you so much!

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niee87 October 3 2010, 22:31:47 UTC
OUR better decisions? :P I totally did that one without okaying it with you!

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smoothiegarten October 4 2010, 01:58:19 UTC
LOL, I stand corrected.

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bookblather October 2 2010, 06:57:17 UTC
Heee! I love Grayson's banter with Henry, and his first appearance is as usual awesome. Also, Nate = adorable. I love him. I hope Ellen settles in soon!

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smoothiegarten October 3 2010, 00:09:09 UTC
She'll be just fine, I think! Grayson loves antagonizing his boss, that's for sure, and she is a star for putting up with it. I love little Nate too :D Thank you so much!

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