Two LG Stories

[darkfaerieclaw]

Title: Sometimes You Are the Villain (Eternity is Burning)
Story Continuity: The Lethean Glamour
Flavors: Rhubarb 8: time is money, Blackberry 4: the perfect crime, Mango 29: breaking the rules
Extra/Topping: Chopped Nuts, Caramel (Narrating Cyg is 1000-and-some years older than canon!Cyg), Cherry (poetical bookending)
Rating: PG
Summary: And

Comments

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you very much! I'm glad the bookends poetry reminds you of the Odyssey, because those are bits from the abandoned Shayna dare!angsty immortal Cyg!epic that SYATV replaces. Which means I've got the feel down right for next time I try it. Awesome. <3

And if Helene is creepy, it generally means she's in-character, but she's creepy in Cyg's piece, too? Wow, I may have underestimated her.

I'm glad you enjoyed these two. :)

[ichthusfish]

Wow! The first one is just awesome! The second one is very creepy. I especially like "I can't hide, so I'll run until I'm dinner." Nice line :)

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed these. <3

[draloreshimare]

...I really have to visit your index. I loved them both, but I think the dialogue and imagery was most effective in the second piece. :d Mm, pocky...

[darkfaerieclaw]

You have been gone a while, haven't you? (What is an art slam, if you don't mind my asking? I think I could probably do with an excuse to draw lots.)

(And still I think it's safe to say there have been no new main story chapters of LG in the interim. Must work on that.)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked these. ^_^

[draloreshimare]

Haha, uh, months and months? Actually, I was only sort-of here before artslam, but then I REALLY wasn't here during. ArtSlam is a June/July/August draw-a-thon, where you pick a world and stick with it for 92 back-breaking days. It's harsh, but satisfying. :)

(Haha, well, it happens? Strange that I don't have to catch up on chapters. @_@ )

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! I'm delighted you think so. ^_^

[bookblather]

Oh, wow, I am so impressed by that first piece and the poems. I mean, the timeline alone in that piece must have been a headache, and then to write the poems too, wow. And the second one is so Holly. Especially this line: I can't hide, so I'll run until I'm dinner. Great job, on both of them.

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you very much! It's wonderful to hear you like both pieces (and that the first piece merits two wows). <3

(I'm especially relieved you think the second one is in-character for Holly. My Holly voice is dangerously close to entropy, I fear.)