Comments | runaway_tales: Gingerbread/Guava/FOTD smoothie

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Gingerbread/Guava/FOTD smoothie

Aug 20, 2010 22:05

Authors: Marina and Casey
Story: Shifts universe (post-Shifts) [Indexes: Marina's/ Casey's]
Challenge: Gingerbread 23 (as plain as the nose on your face) [Marina]; Guava 1 (what did I ever do to you?) [Casey]; FOTD (vellicate) [both]
Toppings/Extras: Caramel, Sprinkles, Fresh Peaches (You might find that someone close to you needs a hand today, Leo ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] gingerbread, [extra] smoothie, [topping] caramel, [challenge] guava, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [author] casey, [author] marina, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 7

niee87 August 21 2010, 13:26:50 UTC

Haha, I love these two so much. I also love the descriptions and additional stuff you added to this. There can never be too much Mariah and Josh :D

smoothiegarten August 23 2010, 16:31:34 UTC

This is trufax, and thank you! I really liked writing this the way we did it this go around.

bookblather August 22 2010, 04:51:37 UTC

awww, Josh, you're such a good brother. Even when you get kicked in the face. I like the way this conversation went; it's very realistic and adorable.

smoothiegarten August 23 2010, 16:34:00 UTC

Thank you! Casey and I have way too much fun with these two. Poor Josh is usually the punching bag of the operation, but he doesn't mind that much.

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smoothiegarten August 23 2010, 16:34:35 UTC

:D Thanks. Josh and Mariah are really close and he's very in tune with what she feels.

ssundaysunday August 22 2010, 06:30:01 UTC

Aww these two are so cute. I love how concerned Josh is an how easily he can read her. I hope the angsty period isn't too hard on her =(.

smoothiegarten August 23 2010, 16:37:23 UTC

Josh has been very in tune with Mariah's emotions since they were babies, practically. He's being a little dramatic here since Lynne and Drew will definitely have a harder time and Mariah's gotten better at putting up blocks and generally being less sensitive to them, but angst is harder for her to block than calmer moods. Thank you!