crash and burn

[rubyls]

crash and burn
kyuhyun/donghae, eunhyuk/donghae, kyuhyun/sungmin; nc-17; angst; ~5k words
five years after super junior disbands, kyuhyun is still with sungmin and donghae with hyukjae, but there is an unspeakable something between kyuhyun and donghae that strings them along the tightrope of the forbidden.
for bonomanic because she likes kyuhae.

Comments

[rubyls]

for bonomanic?

[bonomanic]

Oh my God. Jay.

This is gorgeousIt put me in a trance, I just forgot for a while that the world even existed because it just melted away and all I could see was the images that your words created. No more sunshine on dirty snow and people walking past my window, but bedrooms with blue walls or dining tables in a restaurant. When it ended, it was like waking up a from a dream without ever noticing that you had fallen asleep

[rubyls]

LKAJSDFJALSDKFASDFV I AM FLAILING SO HARD AT YOUR COMMENT I CAN'T I HAVE TO TAKE A MINUTE TO GET BACK TO YOU ASDFASFALKSDFJ

[rubyls]

my god gina waylt you made my entire year or something asldfaskldf you got EVERYTHING I WANTED TO PUT ACROSS ;~~~~; EVERYTHING OKAY. i wanted it to be heartbreaking but not really because nobody breaks no one's heart, at least not explicitly, and also just... there. they're just skirting around fire waiting for the flames to touch them.

ANSKDFJASDFJ IT WAS MEANT TO BE A KYUHAE/EUNHAE/KYUMIN YOU KNOW. i wanted to write the kyumin from sungmin's point of view and stuff but it just morphed into a kyuhae, i think you sneak into my writing conscious too much ;-;

I AM SO HAPPY YOU GET EVERYTHING OKAY SO HAPPY LIKE BURNING

[melodyprower11]

Oh Dear.

That's not going to end well in the end TT.TT

ahhhh but you're such a good writer, even the not quite happy ending Kyuhae was breathe-taking. I loved the Sun-earth-moon metaphor, it seemed to fit kyuhyun perfectly here.

And also, how Sungmin and Eunhyuk were essentially afterthoughts in this fic, not showing up until the end or the scenes, only coming to mind when kyuhae wasn't thinking of each other, quiet, barely there, almost unimportant except for the fact that they existed. Except they should have been, more than an afterthought, yeah? but they weren't and its sad for them, but I can't help but be happy, because I love Kyuhae. or maybe I'm just reading to much into it >.<

Ahhh~ REALLY REALLY like this.

[rubyls]

oooooh omg your comment is so lovely ;~;

i'm so glad you picked that up because it was really hard to put that in words. it's because sungmin's the one in love with kyuhyun and not vice versa, so sungmin's always on second stage whenever donghae's there, and hyukjae is really the reason why kyuhyun is so attractive to donghae here.

it was supposed to be a kyuhae/eunhae/kyumin fic but it ended up really just a kyuhae fic, idk >< heh the ending... i meant for it to be sad, but it's good that you like it.

this made me so happy, thank you so much! ♥

spot.

[keygasmic]

♥

[hyukhae4ever]

lovely piece <3
though my heart ache like crazy coz wth!
how could they did that to Hyuk?!
TToTT
but that's just me being bias.
this is one beautiful though kinda heart-breaking for me story :)

[rubyls]

yay thank you! it was supposed to be heartbreaking, so i'm glad it made across. i'm glad you liked it :)

[fruitnutberry]

i love your writing style but this is so sad gosh. ;A;

[rubyls]

awww thank you so much ♥ it was meant to be sad, i hope i didn't break your heart! :)

[fruitnutberry]

it broke my heart a little ;A; but it's okay. i'm strong lmao. xD

[rubyls]

awwww D: /fixes your heart