crash and burn

[rubyls]

crash and burn
kyuhyun/donghae, eunhyuk/donghae, kyuhyun/sungmin; nc-17; angst; ~5k words
five years after super junior disbands, kyuhyun is still with sungmin and donghae with hyukjae, but there is an unspeakable something between kyuhyun and donghae that strings them along the tightrope of the forbidden.
for bonomanic because she likes kyuhae.

Comments

[rubyls]

for bonomanic?

[bonomanic]

Oh my God. Jay.

This is gorgeousIt put me in a trance, I just forgot for a while that the world even existed because it just melted away and all I could see was the images that your words created. No more sunshine on dirty snow and people walking past my window, but bedrooms with blue walls or dining tables in a restaurant. When it ended, it was like waking up a from a dream without ever noticing that you had fallen asleep

[rubyls]

LKAJSDFJALSDKFASDFV I AM FLAILING SO HARD AT YOUR COMMENT I CAN'T I HAVE TO TAKE A MINUTE TO GET BACK TO YOU ASDFASFALKSDFJ

[rubyls]

my god gina waylt you made my entire year or something asldfaskldf you got EVERYTHING I WANTED TO PUT ACROSS ;~~~~; EVERYTHING OKAY. i wanted it to be heartbreaking but not really because nobody breaks no one's heart, at least not explicitly, and also just... there. they're just skirting around fire waiting for the flames to touch them.

ANSKDFJASDFJ IT WAS MEANT TO BE A KYUHAE/EUNHAE/KYUMIN YOU KNOW. i wanted to write the kyumin from sungmin's point of view and stuff but it just morphed into a kyuhae, i think you sneak into my writing conscious too much ;-;

I AM SO HAPPY YOU GET EVERYTHING OKAY SO HAPPY LIKE BURNING

[bonomanic]

If I had actually done that, that would've been sort of amazing, heh. ^^ And it would've made me happy because you'd be happy and yeah. :D And oh, I don't know what to say! /flail That just made me happy, you saying that but you know that it's because your writing did that, right? Your words created all those images and feelings and responses and you're amazing and talented and flawless and I'm so glad I met you. ;__; ♥

Sorry about the Kyuhae brainwasihng tho. ;A;

(And oooooh, gorgeous icon!)

[rubyls]

noooooooooo because i'm pretty sure it reads abstract to a lot of people! so it's the mind connection thing we have going on, i'm ceertain of it. ASKDFLASDFJ never ever leave me precious darling bb ;~:

(even more gorgeous icon here? i'm sure you'll agree :D)

[bonomanic]

/squishes you for the precious

[bonomanic]

Why are you so perfect, girl? I want to build a shrine for this fic and worship you. I don't even know what to say, I'm still starstruck. Right now, I'm trying to wrap my mind around the fact that what you've been complaining about as not good all this time is this flawless piece of perfection. It's poetry in prose form. I will cry tears of gratitude if I ever manage to write something that's even half as beautiful as this.

I love you. ♥

[rubyls]

WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS IT'S NOT THAT GOOD (though i do admit i am pretty happy with it, i just think it might read kind of abstract or something and people will be ...um wtf) lasdf;lasdfbslfh you write fucking good as it is STOP IT

i really am hopping around to restrain myself from flying to amherst right now to hug you and kidnap you forever. no lie.

[bonomanic]

YES IT IS THAT GOOD. I HAVE READ ENOUGH FANFIC TO BE ABLE TO SAY THAT SO SHUT UP. (Abstract isn't necessarily bad, and you did one hell of a job with creating images that burn themselves into one's ind.) Totally different, tho. ;A;

I would go willingly. ;)

[rubyls]

see this is what i mean when i say you have standards for fic but are too lenient with my fic. ;~; it was so hard you know i have never written kyuhae in my LIFE and i wouldn't have gone near it with a ten-foot pole if i hadn't met you DDD: were the characterization and kyuhae dynamics okay BECAUSE I AM SO UNSURE!!!!

:DDDD