The Fifth Commandment

[ru_salki99]

Title: The Fifth Commandment
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: R
Pairing: Mal/Jayne
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters or rights to Firefly. It all belongs to Mutant Enemy.
Author's notes: This was born from a conversation between myself and little_dumlping and so I dedicate it to you my lovely.
Warning: MPREG and Fluffiness.
Summary: After suffering from

Comments

[little_dumpling]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeiy! i loved it sooooo much! bah! *grins like a complete fool*

i totally got all teared up when Jayne was watching the scan of JJ in the medbay, and awwes, Jayne kissing Mal and telling him he's the most important thing to him after JJ? *Squeeee!*

*hugs you very very hard* it was fantastic! everyone at works thinks i'm on drugs now, as i've been sitting here grinning like an idiot while i read!

*hugs you again* *squee!*

[ru_salki99]

Did it taste like pink marchmallows?

Hee hee, so glad you enjoyed it ^__^

[little_dumpling]

i just noticed this, but did you just say "Marchmallows?"

[ru_salki99]

typo - meant to say 'marshmallows' just too lazy to fix it. But thanks for pointing my slothness out ^__^

[xenaclone]

That was amazing. I suppose things have changed in the intervening years; making Mpreg something - well, commonplace I guess. Beautifully written!

[ru_salki99]

thanks. glad you liked it :)

[bookaddict43]

awwwww! Fluffy angst or angsty fluff as it might be :) I love JJ!

[ru_salki99]

Aw, I'm glad. Fluffy angst isn't something I do often, but glad it worked well ^____^

[yessire]

oh my I do love me some mpreg! great job.

[ru_salki99]

Yeah. it's good in moderation - too much of a good thing and all that :)

Glad you enjoyed it.