Comments | rt_challenge: Prompt 15

jadeddiva in rt_challenge

Prompt 15

Jun 30, 2006 11:18

Title: Peace & Quiet
Author: jadeddiva
Format & Word Count: Drabble, 98
Rating: PG
Prompt: 15. Things Left Unsaid
Summary: It’s quiet but that’s maybe how it should be.
Author’s Note: Just a wee drabble. Concrit, as always, is welcome.

( Peace & Quiet )

prompt 15, jadeddiva

Comments 26

le_parapluie June 30 2006, 15:53:48 UTC

Word.

quiet insistence and silent praise is lovely.

jadeddiva June 30 2006, 16:03:14 UTC

Thank you v. much.

author_by_night June 30 2006, 15:58:51 UTC

Lovely... just lovely.

This could've been smutty, but it really wasn't - it was all emotional romance. And that's what I love about it.

jadeddiva June 30 2006, 16:03:26 UTC

Thanks for reading :)

hplilypotter June 30 2006, 16:32:36 UTC

Wonderfully said (and written).

jadeddiva June 30 2006, 20:47:57 UTC

Thank you :)

everknowledge June 30 2006, 16:34:02 UTC

Wonderful, simply wonderful.

jadeddiva June 30 2006, 20:48:06 UTC

Thanks

iamweebles June 30 2006, 16:34:09 UTC

This is very beautiful and has such lovely sentiment. I really like it! If there's any concrit at all, it would be that the repetition of the word "lips" jars just a little for me - perhaps "mouth" would work better in the second instance?

jadeddiva June 30 2006, 18:24:36 UTC

Originally, I liked the repition but I like your suggestion better. Thanks!