Fic: Embossed on Your Hands for midnitemaraud-r

[ohkaye]

Title: Embossed on Your Hands
Author: ohkaye
Recipient: midnitemaraud-r
Rating: NC-17
Highlight for Warnings: *Graphic oral and anal sex, rimming*
Word Count: 2,104
Summary: Hiding in cramped space with three other boys has become somewhat more complicated for Remus Lupin since he discovered the delights of one Sirius Black's arse.
Author's notes: This is not nearly

Comments

[brighty18]

This is made of win on myriad levels. For some reason I did not bother to look at who wrote it, but I totally knew it was you.

It was hot as hell, but also very amusing and boyish. I adored the beginning with them all jammed in a small space like that. Despite the fact that James’ bony arse is digging into Remus’ lower back, he almost feels that Sirius is the only one here with him, caught between him and a stone door. He doesn’t break the stare they’re locked into; instead, he presses a small open-mouthed kiss against the nape of his neck, steadying himself against his hips. James thrashes in incoherent woe. Remus takes the opportunity to angle his groin into the firm flesh of Sirius’ arse - Sirius who shivers again and pushes back, his hands braced on the stone in front of him. There was something both hot and hilarious about James and Peter's cluelessness coupled with Sirius and Remus' lust. It was a fine balance, my dear

[ohkaye]

Thank you so much! They always seemed like the talking type to me. :3 *cuddles*

[eprime]

Mmm...very nice. I especially thought the bit in the closet was sexy with Remus touching and whispering things to Sirius, with James and Peter shoved in their with them. Good times! ;)

[ohkaye]

Thank you! Nothing like a little bit of inadvertent exhibitionism to get things going :P

[museme87]

Pardon me while I fan myself. That was fantastically hot! I, too, loved the closet part--the whispers, touching, the cluelessness of James and Peter. And the prank was really brilliant. I've never read a fic about turning the Great Hall into a mirror for the Black Lake, but the idea is awesome. Well done!

[ohkaye]

*fans you!* Thank you so much!

[sleeper6]

The Marauders all in a tight space--ha ha, funny!

And of course the sex between our boys is so, so good. And amazing and hot. Well done!

[ohkaye]

I figure they probably managed to be crammed into awkward spaces pretty often :P Thank you!

[lotherington]

I absolutely loved this! The 'daft-bastard smile' description was brilliant, and the whole thing was very hot and generally fantastic. :)

[ohkaye]

Thank you so much!