Fic: Embossed on Your Hands for midnitemaraud-r

[ohkaye]

Title: Embossed on Your Hands
Author: ohkaye
Recipient: midnitemaraud-r
Rating: NC-17
Highlight for Warnings: *Graphic oral and anal sex, rimming*
Word Count: 2,104
Summary: Hiding in cramped space with three other boys has become somewhat more complicated for Remus Lupin since he discovered the delights of one Sirius Black's arse.
Author's notes: This is not nearly

Comments

[brighty18]

This is made of win on myriad levels. For some reason I did not bother to look at who wrote it, but I totally knew it was you.

It was hot as hell, but also very amusing and boyish. I adored the beginning with them all jammed in a small space like that. Despite the fact that James’ bony arse is digging into Remus’ lower back, he almost feels that Sirius is the only one here with him, caught between him and a stone door. He doesn’t break the stare they’re locked into; instead, he presses a small open-mouthed kiss against the nape of his neck, steadying himself against his hips. James thrashes in incoherent woe. Remus takes the opportunity to angle his groin into the firm flesh of Sirius’ arse - Sirius who shivers again and pushes back, his hands braced on the stone in front of him. There was something both hot and hilarious about James and Peter's cluelessness coupled with Sirius and Remus' lust. It was a fine balance, my dear.

And speaking of fine balances, I loved the way you combined sex and banter. It always strikes me that these two would talk during sex, but you seem to capture that exceedingly well. It was funny without breaking the erotic momentum - and that can be tricky. I also loved the nuzzling, yet another thing that I see these two doing. It's very canine and yet a common kink.

Great job!

[ohkaye]

Thank you so much! They always seemed like the talking type to me. :3 *cuddles*