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Day 1 - Fic: Team Time: Parlor Trick Magic and Other Trivialities

Oct 03, 2016 07:29

Team: Time

Title: Parlor Trick Magic and Other Trivialities

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Language, very brief mentions of abuse, brief mention of smoking, implied/referenced sex

Genre: Alternate Universe, Fluff

Word Count: 17,000

Summary: Magic glimmers in each of their eyes as for the first time they truly meet and suddenly realize maybe, perhaps, one ( Read more... )

team time, rs_games 2016, fic

Comments 7

bookgrrrl2006 October 3 2016, 16:34:52 UTC

i really enjoyed everything about this story. it made me laugh the whole way through, but remus's thoughts were particularly hilarious. i have read many coffee shop stories, but this one felt really original and cool. what impressed me most, though, was the way you managed to craft to separate characters for all the dream sequence or backflash parts. i would love to read a whole story of just them.

museinabsentia October 3 2016, 16:48:23 UTC

Wow, this was just a sweet, lovely, beautiful way to start the games. Your use of language is simply stunning. I could have commented on at least a half dozen things in the first thousand words, so I’ll leave off on most of that or this could get rambling. However, I do feel obligated to mention that the Buffy reference made me smile. A lot.

The dreams. Oh, goodness, the dreams. I could pinpoint the exact time they were all meant to be, all these snippets of history, even in such tiny little flickers of moments. What a lovely lovely job! Every one of them could have been its own story and I would have read every one of them.

Just remarkably wonderful all around. I frequently wanted to hug them both and sort of bash their heads together, which as far as I’m concerned is a trademark of this pair. I loved every second of this.

(I'm leaving comments in both locations, since I don't know who finds it easier to check where, so yes, this is a duplicate.)

gizenshi October 3 2016, 21:48:38 UTC

That hit all the spots I didn't even know needed hitting. Remus is so relateable! Could do with a proofread though, and the continuity threw me off in some places towards the end, and seemed like the magic thing was building up to something, but then it just fizzled out and disappeared. But I loved reading it!

huldrejenta October 5 2016, 09:29:30 UTC

Really lovely and heart-warming story!
I've left a slightly longer comment over on AO3 :)

abyss_valkyrie October 6 2016, 17:30:00 UTC

'When there's a lull in the current of caffeine addicts paying for his livelihood, he throws stirring straws at the backs of people's necks like their darts and watches their narrow eyed confusion. It's even better when they don't notice.' Yeah, Remus, your mischief is showing :3 ( ... )