Day 1 - Fic: Team Time: Parlor Trick Magic and Other Trivialities

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Time

Title: Parlor Trick Magic and Other Trivialities

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Language, very brief mentions of abuse, brief mention of smoking, implied/referenced sex

Genre: Alternate Universe, Fluff

Word Count: 17,000

Summary: Magic glimmers in each of their eyes as for the first time they truly meet and suddenly realize maybe, perhaps, one

Comments

[abyss_valkyrie]

'When there's a lull in the current of caffeine addicts paying for his livelihood, he throws stirring straws at the backs of people's necks like their darts and watches their narrow eyed confusion. It's even better when they don't notice.' Yeah, Remus, your mischief is showing :3

The bits of magic was so nicely done,I was a little surprised in a good way to see it,the subtle way of writing it without telling us that there's magic from the beginning was so nice!!

'Sirius is being the most gentlemanly umbrella mate there could possibly be and melting the frigid ice around Remus' heart at the same time' is such a sweet sweet line,I couldn't help smiling at this!

All their fumbling around and their relationship in the alternate universe/(verses?),the moments,gosh!Every one of them were such great ideas. The corset one was entertaining mainly because of the class difference you could feel from just one scene and it broke my heart for Remus but Sirius, bless him and his charm, made up for it!! The pirate one was just supppperb,I can just imagine them dressed in that eras outfits and am loving it!!

Though to be honest, nothing made me want to hug Remus more than him thinking he is stronger than armadas! It's just too cute!!! His reaction to adult life is so perfect, I kind of want to pat him and say 'I feel you, bro.'