The start of some drabbles! Woo! ...and one request fulfilled

Mar 24, 2017 01:15

Three, count 'em, three Primeval drabbles...and one Professionals one. Only the Pros one is a request fulflled (many liberties taken, shooting2kill) the others are self indulgent nonsense that appeared when I tried to write other things. Quality absolutely not guaranteed, but hey, it's writing :)

Up and Over, Primeval, PG, Stephen/Ryan )

drabble:primeval, drabble:primeval(slash), drabble:the professionals

Leave a comment

Comments 12

shooting2kill March 24 2017, 08:19:59 UTC
Brilliant! I can just see them distracted by all the delicacies on offer! Thanks so much.

Reply

rospberry March 24 2017, 10:10:09 UTC
Tried to harness my inner 70s child lol. Shocked to discover they still sell those wee jars of paste - remember my granddad was obsessed with the stuff. *whispers* suspect Bodie really did know what he was looking at but just likes to let Doyle feel superior now and then.

Reply


fififolle March 24 2017, 20:40:20 UTC
These are brilliant! I enjoyed reading them so much :D
Up and Over, and Disobeying Orders were especially just genius *g* Everything a drabble should be, telling a story in just a few words :D
You're planning on posting these at Denial, right? *beams hopefully*

Reply

rospberry March 24 2017, 23:48:49 UTC
Ooh, lovely comments! Thanks so much, luv. Out of practice but writing these things is fun! I will attempt to share on Denial but me and html are having a battle at the mo. So long since I posted on LJ that everything is more of a battle than it probably should be *glares at posts with insane spacing*.

Reply

fififolle March 31 2017, 07:54:39 UTC
Sorry I am behind, but I am so glad you posted at the comm, and more fic, yay!! I am on catch up today <3

Reply


fredbassett March 25 2017, 14:05:06 UTC
These are fab! You've certainly not lost the writing knack!

The character voices in all of them were absolutely spot on, and really brought a smile to my face.

Ryan ogling Stephen's arse was perfect, and the thought of him storing something up for a later wank was very hot. *g*

Lester being quoted by Jess was utterly wonderful!

And I enjoyed the Pros drabble, too. Again, I could really hear the voices.

Reply

rospberry March 26 2017, 20:48:18 UTC
Best comments to get, ever, especially considering how paranoid I am about characterisation! Amazing how with the writing comes all the old insecurities about it, too lol. Really glad you enjoyed them (and ta for reading the Pros one!)

Reply


eriah211 March 26 2017, 20:35:01 UTC
#1 LOL, Ryan had a very good reason! *g*

#2 Aaawww and LOL! Smart Ryan!

#3 Aaaaaaawwwwww, Lester does care, doesn't he? That was lovely!

#4 Sorry, I don't know the fandom, oops! ^_^

Reply

rospberry March 26 2017, 20:51:46 UTC
LOL glad you enjoyed them...for some reason I now have the desire to write Becker/Lester.

Reply

eriah211 March 26 2017, 21:00:34 UTC
Yes, pretty please! *waves big pompoms*

Reply


goldarrow April 2 2017, 13:08:20 UTC
Those are lovely.
I adore the humour, and you've got the characters beautifully.

Reply

rospberry April 2 2017, 20:53:59 UTC
Thanks so much!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up