Pete and Jackie were bickering about something - Rose heard the words pot roast and fire extinguisher and bloody disgusting banana bread - and Jake had been pulled into the battle over the egg rolls, trying to keep Mickey from getting chewed on and Reggie from getting dropped head first onto the floor. Rose and the Doctor stood back from the chaos, watching.
Okay, that is adorable. The one adventure he’s never had, indeed.
Congratulations on finally finishing this, by the way.
By the way, I love how you wrote Reggie, and I love how you wrote Rose. I hate when people have it that she would litterally drop whatever she had for him. The way you portrayed her was perfect.
Even better than I thought it'd be, and considering my ridiculously high standards where you are concerned, that is saying something. Well done and kudos to you, my friend!
Also: Reggie makes me annoyed, which is the usual reaction I have to childre. Kudos for that as well!
Thank you for finally finishing this. By the way, the color scheme of your journal makes it rather hard to read, and even reversing the colors doesn't help. Especially light brown on brown is difficult.
I love your writing, and am very glad you have finished this.
I'm so glad you liked it. Sorry you had trouble with the journal layout - I quite like the black font on creme background, but some things work better for some eyes than others, I suppose. I also post at Teaspoon and an Open Mind, which is black on white, if that's easier for you.
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Okay, that is adorable. The one adventure he’s never had, indeed.
Congratulations on finally finishing this, by the way.
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as usual
By the way, I love how you wrote Reggie, and I love how you wrote Rose.
I hate when people have it that she would litterally drop whatever she had for him. The way you portrayed her was perfect.
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Even better than I thought it'd be, and considering my ridiculously high standards where you are concerned, that is saying something. Well done and kudos to you, my friend!
Also: Reggie makes me annoyed, which is the usual reaction I have to childre. Kudos for that as well!
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Thanks for reading, dude! I'm so glad you liked it.
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Thanks for reading. ;)
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By the way, the color scheme of your journal makes it rather hard to read, and even reversing the colors doesn't help. Especially light brown on brown is difficult.
I love your writing, and am very glad you have finished this.
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Thanks for reading!
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